Tales of Destiny (R) Boxart - Redone

 
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 27, 2013 6:06 pm    Post subject: Tales of Destiny (R) Boxart - Redone Reply with quote

My biggest digital paint yet. Drawn from scratch and coloured from scrath. Obviously the original (from whatever quality I could find) was used as a reference. Rutee was easily the hardest with her many straps and buckles. And black is quite annoying to shade with, I find. Would love to know your thoughts!


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 27, 2013 6:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's a lot better than anything I could ever do. Major props!
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 27, 2013 6:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks flammy~
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 27, 2013 8:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The only 2 things that bugs me is Leon face and Philia glasses. Leon faces looks weird for some reason and didn't saw Philia glasses until I put my face next to the monitor.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 27, 2013 8:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

His eyes are odd, they looked odd to me when I was doing them, and then I looked at my box art for reference and his eyes are weird on that too, so that's probably why I made the mistakes.
And Philia's glasses I had completely forgotten about. They're so dull because they were part of the original lineart, I meant to do a separate layer for them but Philia was the first thing I did so it went a little unnoticed.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 27, 2013 8:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really big improvement from last time! Is your coloring layer above your lineart? I would place it beneath the lineart to give it a nicer effect.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 27, 2013 9:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No, it's below the lineart. I'm just **** at lineart. Like, so **** there should be a book on it. I just can't do it, I've tried so many tutorials and I can't grasp it properly.
To tell you the truth I don't really like lineart that much. I hate seeing nice images ruined with these black outlines, and I see loads of incredible digital paintings that don't even look like they have lineart outlining.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 27, 2013 10:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Leon's face seems fine to me. A bit feminine but he always wore too much eye shadow so it seems in character. It's Stahn's that seems a little off. Woodrow is eyeing me like a creep but, considering his position on the box, I would expect nothing less.

These are minor details though, you done great.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 27, 2013 11:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Now that eyes are being pointed out to me, the only character's who I'm truly happy with are Rutee's. But I probably spent the most time on Rutee anyway because she's got so much detail.

Thanks Ryuu!
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 28, 2013 4:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't see what could possibly be wrong with Philia's (besides the under-apparent glasses).
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