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KeeleTheMan
Joined: 13 Jan 2013
Posts: 44
Location: *♥*♥~Keele~♥*♥*
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 Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2013 11:56 pm Post subject: Ashes of the Past - A Keele story |
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HELLO, PEOPLE!!!!!11 I'm back. I made a fanfiction of Keele. THIS IS MY FIRST TIME SO SHUT UP!!!
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6:45 AM JANUARY, 13 SUNDAY
Drinking his daily cranberry juice, Keele is reading the newspaper that has arrived on his doorstep.
Reid knocks on Keele's door.
"Hmmm, Who could that be?" Keele wondered.
Keele walks over to the door and opens it.
"G'morning, Keele." Reid said.
"Uhhh, Greetings." Keele said.
"What are you doing here at this time?" Keele asked.
Reid throws hairy chicken at Keele, knocking his cranberry juice right out of his right hand.
"What? Why did you do that?" Keele asked.
"...Anyway, Now that I got your attention..." Reid said.
*Meanwhile, Spada is in the moutains and he disappeared.*
"So, you want me to burn it?" Keele asked.
"Yup." Reid replied.
7:08 AM JANUARY, 13 SUNDAY
Keele is traveling through the mountains to burn it.
"What are you doing, Keele?" Meredy asked.
"Go away." Keele replied.
8:12 AM JANUARY, 13 SUNDAY
Keele has arrived at the fire mountains.
He struggles to get up to the top of the mountain, But he manages to do it.
Keele lifts it up and throws it down the fire mountain, Where it will burn.
"Yeah!" Max says
Keele slides down and trips at the end of the steep hill of the fire mountain.
Meredy walks over to Keele, and helps Keele up.
"What were you doing up into the fire mountain?" Meredy asks.
"I've burned it." Keele replied.
"What is it that you have burned?" Meredy asks.
"Go away." Keele replied.
9:13 AM JANUARY, 13 SUNDAY
Keele was heading back to his home, UNTIL the bear plowed him over and knocked over his magical stuff.
"This is important stuff!" Keele yelled.
Now Keele looks all over for his stuff.
Keele has only found half of what dropped. Keele is now lost in the woods.
He's trying to find his way right now.
7:23 PM JANUARY, 13 SUNDAY
Keele has decided to stay in the woods for the night.
He has the campfire going, and he's all ready to head to bed.
Keele is going to sleep now.
12:04 AM JANUARY, 14 MONDAY
Keele had trouble sleeping, and went back to the campfire to warm up.
"THE FIRE'S DYING!111" Keele yelled.
Keele looks around the woods for something to throw into the campfire.
Keele has found a backpack, it contained: A half eaten burger, Research notes and a toy elephant, Which appears to be a whistle.
"Hmmm, This stuff could be of some use!" Keele said
Keele goes over to the campfire to throw in some of these items.
Keele throws in somebody's research notes.
"Hah, They didn't even know what they were talking about!" Keele said.
Keele throws in the elephant whistle.
"Hah, Children toy's are no use to me." Keele said.
Keele almost throws in the half eaten burger.
"Well, actually if there's nothing else to eat... I guess I'll have to eat this. Blah!" Keele said.
Keele takes one bite of the half eaten burger.
"Grrrhhh, I'll save it for later." Keele said in disgust.
Keele heads back to sleep.
7:02 AM JANUARY, 14 MONDAY
Keele wakes up.
Keele looks at the half eaten burger for a short while, But he doesn't do anything with it.
Keele examines the area around him.
"Oh, this is obviously the right path to my home!" Keele said.
Keele walks down the path, all peacefully UNTIL, The bear is hungry.
"Oh no!" Keele yells.
Keele throws the half eaten burger at the bears face.
Keele runs away as fast as a Keele can.
The bear is not hungry anymore.
8:09 AM JANUARY, 14 MONDAY
Keele returns to home.
Keele walks up to the doorstep, Picks up the newspaper and goes in.
"*Sniff sniff* Hmmm, I don't remember my house smelling like dirty feet." Keele said.
"Oh, hey, Keele." Reid said as he got up off the floor.
"R-Reid?! Why are you still here?!" Keele asked in anger.
"Ummm, It's a nice place. It's much cleaner than my home." Reid replied
"Well, I'd like to keep it that way. So, Go away." Keele said.
"Fine, Keele. Sheesh!" Reid replied.
Reid storms out of Keele's house.
"Hmph!" Keele said.
Keele grabs out a glass and fills it with cranberry juice.
Keele starts to read the newspaper.
"Hmmmm." Keele said
Keele spots an article about an arsonist running about in Rashean's village on the newspaper.
And then Keele notices something.
"Is that supposed to be me on the suspect list?" Keele said.
"THIS IS AN OUTRAGE!1" Keele yelled.
Keele runs to Rashean's village to clear things up with the village.
8:31 AM JANUARY, 14 MONDAY
Keele arrives at the village.
All of the villagers are outside of their home and are looking at Keele angrily as he enters the village.
"There he is! The man! Keele the man!" One of the villagers yelled.
"I didn't do it! And I'll prove it too!" Keele said.
"Let me through to the villager elder!" Keele asked.
Meanwhile, Spada appears at the mountains and eats Snicker bars as he slowly fades away.
Back at Rashean's village.
"And that's why it is not me!" Keele said.
"Oh, then how do you explain this?!" The village elder said as he showed his burned toupee.
"That was yours? Well..." Keele said.
Keele runs off to Farah's house.
Keele barges into Farah's house and quickly barricades the door from the angry villagers.
Keele sees Farah and Meredy.
"Farah, You gotta help me! They all think I'm the arsonist!" Keele said.
"Well, maybe if you could help me find my old dress." Farah said.
"You didn't need it anyways!" Keele said.
"What? Why are you saying that?" Farah asked.
"...I burned it." Keele replied.
"Keele burn dress? Why?" Meredy asked.
Meredy looks over to Farah.
"I lost something too!" Meredy said.
Keele's face stuns while looking at Meredy.
"It was my backpack with all my things in it!" Meredy said.
"B-B-Backpack?!" Keele asked.
"You bet!" Meredy said.
"It had my friend's research notes and a pretty elephant in it." Meredy said.
"Uhhh, I know... nothing of that!" Keele said.
Keele jumps out the window and falls into a bush. Luckily none of the villagers saw him.
"Why did... Keele do that?" Meredy asked.
"Keeles will be Keeles." Farah said.
"Guhh! What did I land on?" Keele said.
Keele dusts himself off and runs into the woods.
8:58 AM JANUARY, 14 MONDAY
Keele is in the woods, Finding his way to his house.
Keele finds Chat in the woods.
"Ready to fire." Chat said.
Chat jumps off the edge and splats on the ground.
"...What?" Keele said.
Keele wanders around the woods for a while.
Keele was all good UNTIL, KEELE SAW THE BEAR!11 Oh, wait... It's just Reid
"Hey, Keele." Reid said.
"Whoa!" Keele said.
"What happened here?" Keele asked.
"I found a bear and I skinned him. As simple as that." Reid said.
"Huh." Keele said.
"*Sniff sniff* Mmmmm, I can't wait to eat this bear meat!" Reid said.
"Mind starting a fire for me, Keele?" Reid asked.
"Hmmm, I guess I could... But we need something to start a fire with..." Keele said.
"Oh? I could get a few sticks or something. Would that work?" Reid asked.
"...OF COURSE IT WOULD WORK!" Keele replied.
Reid heads off to get some sticks.
Keele spots a bag on the ground.
"Is this Reid's?" Keele thought to himself.
Keele takes the bag.
"What's inside here?" Keele wondered.
"I... I shouldn't... But I must!" Keele said.
"No..." Keele said.
Keele puts it in his pocket anyways.
"Hmmmm, This campfire might draw too much attention!" Keele said.
Reid returns with the sticks.
"Hah!" Reid says as he's putting down the sticks.
"I've got the sticks!" Reid said.
"Oh, Perfect..." Keele said.
"Okay... So, are you gonna do this, or am I?" Reid asked.
"Uhhh, You." Keele replied.
"Okay, then. I'm a professional at making campfires!" Reid said.
"Tch, You sure? You SURE?! Well, I'm a professional at making FIRES!" Keele said.
"Read the newspaper." Keele said.
"...Anyway, time to make this fire!" Reid said.
"And eat this yummy bear meat!" Reid said.
Reid starts the fire.
"No!" Keele yelled.
Keele runs over to the fire and stomps it out.
"What's your deal?" Reid asked.
"The campfire will draw too much attention to me!" Keele said.
"...What's going on?" Reid asked.
Keele explains everything to Reid.
"Well, why didn't you tell me before I gathered the sticks and made the fire?" Reid asked.
"...I...I just decided not to." Keele said.
"Okay, whatever- Wait... where's my bag?" Reid asked.
"Bag? Bag? What bag? You had a bag? Since when?" Keele asked.
"Yeah, I had a bag. It was right here a moment ago... Maybe some stupid raccoon took it or something." Reid said.
"But... I need that bag. That bag has all my stuff in it!" Reid said.
"Like, even my underwear! And my chewy chews!" Reid said.
"Oh... Go check the bush over there or something." Keele said.
"Alright..." Reid said.
Reid goes over to the bush and checks it.
"Man, I gotta get out of here." Keele thought to himself.
Keele runs off deeper inside the woods.
"Well, I didn't see it there Kee- Huh?" Reid said.
"Where'd he go?" Reid wondered.
KEELE'S RUNNING AWAY!1
Keele finds his way back to his house.
Keele locks the door sweating and stinking.
9:11 AM JANUARY, 14 MONDAY
Keele hides in his bed with fear and more sweat.
People bang on Keele's door.
"Oh no... People..." Keele whispered to himself.
"I guess there's only one thing to do..." Keele said.
Keele goes to his door. Keele OPENS the door.
Now there's a bunch of sweaty villagers and Reid, Farah, Meredy too.
But the sweaty villagers! It's so... disgusting.
"Keele, Come to the Rashean's village with us." The village elder said.
"We'll discuss your punishment dere." The village elder said.
"Oh, alright..." Keele said.
9:25 AM JANUARY, 14 MONDAY
At the village.
"Your punishment will be..." The villager elder said.
"A year of community service for our village!" The village elder said.
"NOOOOO!111 Do I get to burn things?" Keele asked.
"No." The village elder replied.
"Oh, Keele." Farah said.
10:05 AM JANUARY, 15 TUESDAY
So Keele has started his community work the next day.
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Now when I look back at it.... I will say "I made that..." And SMILE!!!!!11
I like it. I didn't read it again after I finished so, there might be something stupid that I forgot to fix. PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF THERE IS!
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People have been wonderin' where you've been. o.O
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KeeleTheMan
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| Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:27 am Post subject: |
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OH MY GOD WHO??!!?!?!?!? I AM HERE NOW!!! Wait... It BETTER not be AquaRimms. But please~ Tell me who!!! Wait... What did you think of my story?
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KeeleTheMan
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I fixed something in the story so, You're gonna have to re-read it.
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