The Crystal Journey [Discussion]

[HotFire]

Alright! I am going to try bringing this back. It would be awesome if the old group could get back together, and maybe have some new people

Also, if you were in the RP before and still remember your character(s), you are welcomed to use them! Just let me know and I can PM you the link, unless you want to find it.



Credit goes to GM for this. <3

NOTE: I may edit a few things still, but everything is pretty solid as of now.

Story

In the world of Talaria, there existed a queen. She was very kind and gentle, willing to do anything to help and protect her people. This she swore to. No one expected anything to happen, for Talaria had seen nothing but peace. But one day, a terrible darkness enveloped the land, threatening to engulf everyone and everything. It was at this very moment that the queen took action. Using the power within her body, she created the eight sacred Evenos Crystals. These crystals had the power to either vanquish evil, or harvest it, depending on who possessed them. In doing so, her life was drained, leaving her on the brink of death. During her last days, she traveled the land, scattering the crystals deep within the planet, sealing the dark power. Upon her return, she collapsed. Her last words were those to her servants: “As time passes, the power of the Evenos Crystals will begin to dissipate. When this happens, the darkness will begin to reappear. It will be the duty of the princess at that time to do as I did and revive the crystals powers. In doing so, the land will be safe from the evil power that I sealed away. I leave the task of passing this message on to you. May Talaria be ever peaceful...” And with that, she passed away. The servants passed the message onto their children, and so on. As the years passed, the crystals weakened. The land desperately awaited a princess, but there wasn’t one. Until, the birth of Crystal Tohiksna.

RULES:
{If you do not agree with them, then it would be wise to not join~
The rules should be followed at all times, regardless of the circumstances.}

1. Absolutely no character controlling (unless you have permission and I know about it!). Whoever excessively character controls will be kicked out. You have been warned.

2. If there are any fight scenes, you cannot avoid every hit. It wouldn't be fair.

3. Any major plot changes with your character should be PMed to me for an OK.

4. Posts should be at least a paragraph.

5. Be sure to spell check, as well as re-read your post for any errors.

6. ANY EXTENDED ABSCENCES, INTENTIONAL OR NOT, WILL RESULT IN BEING KICKED OUT.

Places in Talaria

{Falunel has helped alot with the descriptions, so it was not all me}

{The land of Tolaria is vast, with different geography and climate in each place.(I thought it would be neat too link to the pictures so everyone could get a little visual of what everything looks like. NOTE: I do not own these pictures, and neither does GM. They are only meant to be used for visual.For places that are new, I might just google and get images that way.) }

+Ralam- The Capital+

This city houses the royal family of Tohiksna. The castle is kept under very heavy guard in order to protect the princess. Her journey to revive the Evenos Crystals is drawing near. There are also many merchants and people living here.

+Kladir- Village of Mystics+

A hidden village known only to the inhabitants. Mostly elves populate this village, but there are a few other races. The people here can control the elements, giving them the title of “the Mystics”. With their power over the elements, the people have been able to gather magic into a sort of reservoir. They draw magic from that reservoir in order to draw water, grow crops, provide light, and various other functions to maintain their peaceful lifestyle. The town relies on that magic to survive.

+Icma- The Merchant's Town+

Merchants from all over can be seen here exchanging their goods. There is also a mercenaries guild here. Icma is a must for any traveler to visit.

+Tiren Port+

The port town of Icma. Nicknamed "The Town of Beginnings" because most peoples journeys start from here. With Icma being so close, Tiren has a variety of little shops in which one may stock up on any last minute items that they wish to have.

+Draka- The Underground City+

Home mainly to dwarves, this city produces a wide variety of rare weapons, armor, and accessories. Can only be reached from inside the Pala Mountains.

+Andrir- Home of the Padrans+

A floating city with many secrets. Inhabited by the Padrans (refer to Races).Appears to be almost some kind of ruin. No way to access unless one were able to fly. (To get an image of Andrir, just picture Exire from Symphonia ha)

There is a risk of falling off of the walkways, so to protect those whose dragons have not fully developed yet, some safeguards were put up to prevent such a thing from happening.

+Micla- Village of Water+

Located in the middle of the ocean, Micla is home to the Aquadas (refer to Races). It is pretty much isolated from the world, recieving very few visitors. Only way to reach Micla is through a dangerous voyage through the ocean. The Aquadas wisdom of the world is very vast. The village is half underwater, and half above. It was only recently that the Aquadas built shelters for travelers to stay in. However, a vast majority of the village lies underwater.

+Pala Mountains+

A very dangerous place. Covered and snow and ice, these steep mountains are the his only way to reach the underground village. A volcano can be found here as well, as well as very rare ores that can be used for various purposes. There are also various overhangs, where, if not cautious, unlucky travelers can fall o their death. Somewhere in the mountains exists a safe pass that travels through the mountains, but it is difficult to find due to constant snow.

+Ruins of Talaria+
(Before destruction)

A place of mystery. Little is known about these ruins. Many scholars and curious travelers come here to study them. It is said that there was once an ancient, advanced civilization that once resided here, but something terrible happened. But that is a mere fairy tale.

+Sacred Temples+

Not many know the location of these temples. They house the four sacred Evenos Crystals, which protect the world from the return of the dark power. They are riddled with traps and puzzles in order to prevent anyone from reaching the crystals.

+Balaria- Village of the Zabas+

Located in the desert continent of Talaria, this is the only place the Zabas (refer to Races) can live. Entry by anyone that is not a Zaba is forbidden. It is rather large for a village, and it seems that the Zabas are hiding something, though it is unknown as to what this may be. There are also some ruins located further in the desert, but they have not been looked at or investigated, so treasures and secrets may be lying there, waiting to be found.

+Gira Port+

The port town of Balaria. Due to the surrounding desert climate, Gira receives few visitors. It is a good place for one to prepare for their journey into the desert.

+Oasis of Calm Winds+

Located outside of Balaria halfway through the desert, this oasis is a necessary stop for all travelers coming through the desert. If it were not for this stop, travelers would die in the desert. It is the only spot in the desert that is not plagued by violent winds and occasional sandstorms. the Oasis is fed by an underground reservoir, the same that the Zabas within the city draw water from. It also has acquired the nickname of "Traveler's Oasis".

MAP OF TALARIA BY YUKIKO


Races

+Humans- Most common race found in Talaria. Some train in the art of magic, but not many. It is very rare to see a human without a weapon (besides children, the elderly, and mothers). Very curious, which often can lead them into situations that they might regret.

+Elves- Elves are very wise and their power over the elements is strong. They are also very skilled at using bows and swords. Elves are very kind and are willing to help with anything. However, they have trouble with the Zabas, which might explain the discrete dislike. It is unknown why this hatred exists between the Zaba and the Elves, but it is extremely rare to see one of each species together. There are some elves who have decided to put aside their hatred towards the Zabas and try to create a world in which the two races can co-exist.

+Aquadas- known as the “People of Water”. Every is able to control the water element with extreme skill. Some can even control some of the other elements with training. Very knowledgeable of the past (its rumored that some even have the ability to see the future) Aquadas are able to stay under water for a very long period of time, as well as walk on land. They also excel in the use healing arts. All Aquadas are distinguished by their light blue skin color. They are also able to communicate to each other using high pitched sounds that only Aquada's are able to create (kind of like dolphins.)

Aquadas are very sensitive to polluted water, so if they cast any magic in polluted water, the effects of the magic will be extremely weakened. Aquadas also become sick if in polluted water for an extended period of time. They have the ability to cleanse polluted waters, but the process is long, and only a select few know how to do it.

+Padrans- “People of the Skies”. A race of many secrets. They are given a dragon at the age of 5 and can control, as well as communicate with them. Some may choose to control other creatures, but if they do, they are looked down upon by their fellow Padrans (even if they are family).Padrans live an isolated life, since they live in the sky. Some chose to leave Andrir in search of a life on the surface world. They have a ritual to get their dragon at the age of 5, which consists of dragon eggs being placed in front of the child. If the egg glows, then the child gets that dragon, and is able to bond with it upon hatching. However, some Padrans fail to pass the ritual, and if they do, they are shunned in the society. They don't really concern themselves with surface matters, since they are not affected by them, but if the world is to be saved, this will have to change.

Failed Padrans are pitied and reviled at once- pitied for never gaining the freedom of a dragon, but reviled and mocked as inferior, as if they had failed because they were dumb or sinful. Failed Padrans are the lowest caste, and perform the most demeaning jobs. Some of them travel to the surface world, but most stay- for them, leaving is giving up, the final confirmation that they do not belong.

+Dwarves- A race that prefers to live underground. They are rather small, but you dont want to mess with one. They can be skilled with almost any weapon and can control the element of earth. Some choose to abandon their underground lives in search of things in the world. Very few choose to study magic.Skilled craftsmen.

+Zabas- Zabas are a mix between any animal and a human. They are victim to discrimination and persecution almost everywhere, which is why Balaria is the only place for them. Their feud with the elves runs deep, but both sides have different stories. Zabas are able to use weapons, magic, and their body parts (claws, teeth, ect.) Very protective and defensive. This can be used for inspiration only

+Dragons- ONLY FOR PADRANS "Lords of the Skies". Be creative! They should match their owners personality a bit. This can be used for inspration only

Applying for a Character
{Your application should follow this. Just PM me with it or post it here. I'm on almost everyday, so I will definitely see it. If you are PMing it to me, give me a heads up, since the pop up doesn't work. My character is Crystal by the way. Characters that are accepted will be put in at the end of this post.}

Name:(first needed. Last is optional)

Nickname:(you dont need one if you dont want it)

Gender:

Age:

Race:

Birthplace:

Motto (optional):

General Description:(this should be quite descriptive. Tell about how they look and clothes)

Elements(if any):

Weapon(s):

Attacks:

Personality:

Brief Personal Details/History:(must be at leat a paragraph)

*A sample post is not needed, but is encouraged. This is so I can see how you type.*

OH AND PLEASE NO COPYING OTHER CHARACTERS!

I havent really thought about a limit on the number of characters you can have, but there will be one.

Feel free to make your own character as well. Just remember: BE CREATIVE!!! It makes things more fun.

Pre-organized Roles:
{The following are major roles that will have to be filled at one point during the RP. Aside from the Mayors (which can either be male or female), a bio will be needed. Anyone interested in these roles will have to contact me to get a basic explination of the role that is desired. The characters will also be linked here for convenience.}

-King of Darkness- "Ruler of Evil"- In early legends people say what was really inside the crystals wasn't a being of darkness, but power, power that originated from another being. This man's power was sapped from him and he became utterly weak once more. People say he's long since deceased, while others say he's still hunting for his lost power as he slowly regains some of it. If the man is indeed still alive and is able to retrieve his power once more when it's free he will be able to destroy the entire world and everything on it as we know it. He is also the main antagonist.(TAKEN-Yukiko)

-The Prince of Darkness-He yearns for the power of the Evenos Crystals in order to rule Talavia. He will stop at nothing to destroy those who oppose him. (No longer alive.)

-Crystals Padran- This specific Padran has know Crystal since birth, and has helped raise her. As Crystal grew in age, the Padran acted as her personal bodyguard. Whoever takes this role must know that Crystal and the Padran are basically like family to one another. The user that takes the characters can expect some things to be planned out between them and myself, probably by PM.(TAKEN-Akashic)
(There can be more Padrans though)

-Prince of Darkness' Padran- this person would be working together with the Prince of Darkness, so it would be possible for whoever takes the two characters to discuss things and keep secrets from everyone else. (No longer needed.)

-City Mayors- I am thinking about just giving these to anyone who wants to control them. You do not have to make a character bio. I just would need someone to act as the Mayor of each city that Crystal and her companions travel to. If anyone is interested in having a certain Mayor, let me know.

-Balaria- (Available)

-Kladir- (TAKEN-Falunel)

-Draka- (TAKEN-Zell Nelfes)

-Andrir- (Available)

-Micla- (TAKEN)


Questions and Answers
{This section is where all of your questions will go, along with the answers. If it is something that I haven't really planned out that well, then I will make something up to fit the story. Feel free to PM me any questions, or just post them here!}

+Question:What is the magic system like?

-Answer: The magic system will be just like a standard, Tales-style magic, with incantations, pretty magic circles, and dazzling effects. Mainly combat-oriented. Healing can be used at any time though. This will be used mostly in combat.However, Falunel suggested that a magic system similar to Charter magic also be available to characters. I have yet to decide a name for such a magic system, but I am fine with it being used for quicker combat spells and practical, everyday uses.

Falunel also summed up both systems quite nicely:

[Falunel]

I don't have him well-developed for this world yet, but here's a placeholder to establish an old OC of mine.

Name: Quaza Ascesis

Quaza's a calm, quiet-voiced person. He doesn't get anxious easily- at least not outwardly. Often lost in thought, he tends to be a dreamer and a thinker, not a doer. He likes high, secluded areas for this reason- it gives him a good vantage point to observe people from, and people are less likely to interrupt him.

Sometimes he draws as well- mostly idealized portraits of the world, beautiful, peaceful places; he's not happy with how the world is, but is too weary and pessimistic to do much about it.

EDIT: Another OC I'm establishing and refining later:

Name: Ayeth Fravas

Quaza's friend, and opposite in terms of personality. Like Quaza, he is loyal to friends, almost to a fault. However, he is stern and harsh on others- if someone succeeds in meeting his high standards, their accomplishment is dismissed as a fluke and they are told to do it again. He prefers to participate rather than observe, and has a commanding air.

A hypocrite and a workaholic, he tells others to take care of themselves and never pushes them beyond their limits, but does not know his own limits. He always assumes he can do more, and cannot stand being helpless. As a result, he often pushes himself to the brink of collapse.

Unlike Quaza, he is optimistic- not in that he likes people, but in that he believes that the world can be changed with enough effort. He does not consider it an easy task; in his view, he is just another drop in the bucket, and the real changes will happen long after his lifetime.

Will post a more detailed, fleshed-out post soon, likely with some tweaks. Just wanted to get him established in case someone makes a similar character.
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[Archer]

Hiya HF. This looks cool... Reminds me of Final Fantasy with a bit of a tolkien vibe. I can make the Prince of Darkness, if you want. I'm sure you know my skills are more than adequate ?
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[HotFire]

@SH: You already get the OK ;]

@Archer: Why hello there. It would be great if you could take him. I know you are up for it obviously!

I'll be editing a few things. Just like describing the places a bit better and whatnot after I make my post in another RP, just a heads up.
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Jazz <3
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[Zell Nelfes]

I'll be glad to join. I'm making my characters right now. Question though; Do humans have the ability to cast water spells or only the Aquada race can?
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[HotFire]

[Zell Nelfes]

Name: Kazuo Vitale
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Race: Human
Birthplace: Ralam

General Description: A boy at a height of 5'7, with bright blue eyes and blue short spiky hair. He wears a white tank top inside with a white dress shirt over it. Over the dress shirt is a navy blue sweater vest, and black tie. He also wears black pants and brown shoes. He has a surprisingly toned build.

Elements(if any): Kazuo has the ability to cast intermediate Ice, Water, Earth, Darkness spells.

Weapon(s): A navy blue sword with a thick blade. The blade is black and has an artificial blue design. It has a sapphire gem at center of the grip. At the pommel at the sword is a crescent moon keychain attached. He also has two blue Glock 17 pistol equipped on the both sides of his belt. He's more skilled in close range combat with his sword as opposed to using magic or his pistol.

Attacks:
Zodiac Blade: Has the ability to create Zodiac constellations with his blade. He can control the Water and Earth Zodiac signs. Depending on which zodiac signs he chooses to use, has different effects.
Shooting Star: Passed down from the Vitale generation. A spell that can summon falling stars to attack enemies. (Will be mastered sometime in the RP)
*Unison Attacks*: Can combine techniques with Hisae to create strong attacks. May vary

Personality: A cheerful boy that will do anything for his friends. A laid-back individual but can sometimes be too serious and hot-headed about the people he cares about. Very protective of Hisae, his childhood friend.

Brief Personal Details/History: Born in the family of aristocrats of Vitale. He was taught proper magic and swordsmanships by tutors hired by his parents. He lived with a huge family, and everyone expected him to be the start of the next generation. The Vitale family had a rivalry with the Sinclaire family, making it difficult for both Kazuo and Hisae to make contact. Eventually their rivalry grew into a huge conflict, which devastated the youth's childhood friendships. Eventually, the two had enough of their family ordeals and conflicts with one another, that the both escaped together from their families. In battle, even though both characters have opposite strengths and abilities, they both make an unstoppable team.


Name: Hisae Sinclaire
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Race: Human
Birthplace: Ralam

General Description: A girl at a height of 5'5, that has long orange-red hair down her to back, with bright orange tips, and bangs covered her forehead from left to right. She wears a red dress shirt with a black skirt and black girl's tie. She wears black socks up below her knees and red shoes.

Elements(if any): Hisae has the ability to cast intermediate Fire, Lightning, Wind, and Light spells.

Weapon(s): She carries a slick sharp katana on her left hand, which has a flame design at the hilt. It has a ruby gem at the center of the grip. At the pommel at the sword is a sun keychain that is attached. She also carries a crossbow that is usually attached to her back. The crossbow is able to shoot out energy blasts and has a more variety of techniques as opposed to Kazuo's pistol. She's more skilled in long range battle as opposed to using her sword.

Attacks: Zodiac Shot: Can create Zodiac constellations with her crossbow. She controls the Fire and Wind Zodiac signs. Depending on the zodiac sign she uses, has different effects.
Meteor Storm: A spell passed down by Sinclare from generations. Has the ability to summon meteors to attack enemies. (Will be mastered sometime in the RP)
*Unison Attacks*: Can combine techniques with Hisae to create strong attacks. May vary

Personality: A young girl that worries too much about people close to her. She's stubborn once she makes her decision, and almost nothing can change her mind. She's very genuine to people, even random strangers, and can be very selfless. Very protective of her childhood friend Kazuo.

Brief Personal Details/History: Born in the family of aristocrats of Sinclaire. She was taught proper magic and swordsmanship by tutors hired by his parents. She lived with a huge family, and everyone expected her to be the start of the next generation. The Sinclaire family had a rivalry with the Vitale family, making it difficult for both Kazuo and Hisae to make contact. Eventually their rivalry grew into a huge conflict, which devastated the youth's childhood friendships. Eventually, the two had enough of their family ordeals and conflicts with one another, that the both escaped together from their families. In battle, even though both characters have opposite strengths and abilities, they both make an unstoppable team.
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[HotFire]

Hmmm...

Everything looks good Zell. I gather from the bios that Kazuo and Hisae will be traveling/fighting together?

You're all set. I'll add them to the first post~
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Jazz <3
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[Zell Nelfes]

Most likely, but sometimes the party might get separated. Stuff happens haha.

I edited the post and gave Kazuo Darkness and Hisae Light elements too.
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[Archer]

hey HF I replied to that PM a while back, if you didn't already notice D:
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[HotFire]

Oh. I did not notice ha I'll go check now.

I hope someone makes a Padran (especially Crystal's and the PoD's). They are the coolest race in my opinion

Also, if anyone has any suggestions as o how I can improve the story and everything, do not hesitate to share!
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Jazz <3
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[Psychon]

I'll be joining this once I review the changes and make some adjustments to my older characters. One old character will not be returning but will be replaced. If possible, I will be adding a favorite character of mine I try to use in every RP. I just have to see if he will fit the setting.

[HotFire]

Psychon! ha yesssssssssss.

To be honest, I haven't made any major changes. I'm going to work on describing the places more, and that's about it.

But nice to see you are interested in joining and taking another crack at it!
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Jazz <3
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[Akashic]

[HotFire]