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Ray
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ty Slidah, I'll try working on it later
@Jazzeh:I'll keep that in mind :') I can't render for my life tbh.
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Seraph
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| Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 12:17 pm Post subject: |
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Sir Shrek
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| Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 1:22 pm Post subject: |
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Hey, don't leave me out of all the fun. I'd be happy to work the odd job and get crits on my works.
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I think that thats great. The new contrast really pulled it thru and gave it that depth it sorta lacked. The text though I think should be moved a bit to the right to take away from the negative space and not cover up the focal point.
Oh hey, any crits on my current?
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Slider
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| Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 4:01 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome. Much better, Seraph.
And yeah SS, as I said before, I like your current. It's just a little too much lights and stuff for my taste. I guess. |
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Ryuuko
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| Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 4:07 pm Post subject: |
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That's hot Seraph. Awesome job. =D I think I might make a tag tonight...
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It sucks, but I actually like it. I'm terribly rusty. ;_;
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squidmaster64
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| Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 7:12 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for the comments, Ray and Slyder. :)
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Wow, this is gorgeous! Perfect balance of shinies and negative space imo.
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Your render's a little big, but it's got some great effects. GJ. :)
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Kate Monster
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| Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 8:34 pm Post subject: |
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Newest tag ever.
Looks kinda weird. *-*
EDIT: Forgot to comment~
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YUNA! <3 <3 <3 Anywho, Not really a fan of the text, I think it needs a little bit more. I like it though.
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I love this. <3 Still again. I don't like text. *-*
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I like the effect of the wireframes. I think it's a little bit empty on the right.
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I really like this. I just think the edges are a little bit sharp.
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Lovely colors. <3 I like it.
The first one is the best imo. The 2nd one is fine. The 3rd one is fine too. =/
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I love this. <3 <3 <3 Love it. <3
| Ryuuko wrote: | That's hot Seraph. Awesome job. =D I think I might make a tag tonight...
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I like it except for the red C4Ds. It seems kinda out of place imo. Maybe you can recolor it? 
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Slider
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| Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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@Azu: less bright imo
@Ryuuko: the red stands out a bit too much
time for some slider action
kinda like this one
(lq hurgh; also sry rai it was tempting =[ )
(the green doesn't fit, I know. I tried changing the green c4d, but it only seems to look worse and I don't know why)
messy, chaotic, etc
(HARDCORE CLIPPING MASKS)
tried remaking this kinda
something about this does not appeal to me |
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Ryuuko
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Thanks for the comments people. I knew I should have changed the red. And the image is a stock, and there is a person next to her who I wanted to cover which explains the size of her face. But I actually made a newer, sexier tag. I want to current it.
Comments:
Slyder: In a nutshell, those are all really great. My only concern is the clutter. It seems like you're trying to put so much into one sig, that it just seems really chaotic. Maybe you like it that way, I dunno. But I tend to prefer simple, so that's just my opinion. But they are still awesome.
Simple and sexy. The big white blotch on the right is a little weird, but everything else is amazing. Great job!
Awesome, but I'm not a big fan of the text. Still awesome. And vector-y.
Text. =/ And it's chaotic. But the different colors are cool, and I still love it. =D
Basically exactly what Azu said. The wire things are hot though.
Some of the hot pink seems a bit bright, but this tag is great. I love how all the effects are just in the one area.
Now this tag. Is awesome. I adore the colors and lights. It's amazing. <3
Awesome. Plus it's Leon, and he's amazing. This is one of your best.
I like the vectors. They look awesome.
Another good vector. Not as good as the second one, but still good.
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Phew. If I forgot any, I'm sorry! ^^;
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| Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 8:33 am Post subject: |
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| yeah I'm not too good with moderation. I've noticed that I add either too much or too little =( |
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| Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 10:41 am Post subject: |
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Last thing I made months ago
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| Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 1:53 pm Post subject: |
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I'll join but I'm still learning to get better x3;;
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| Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:06 pm Post subject: |
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| Sakura1106 wrote: | | I'll join but I'm still learning to get better x3;; |
We accept everyone equally so skill level doesn't matter. ^^ Just post your work and we'll try to give you pointers for improving.
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| Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:19 pm Post subject: |
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Something I did outta boredom;
I dunno what to do with the blank spaces >>;
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Seraph
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| Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 7:03 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for comments guys.
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Very nice. Touch up the colors on the stock (green on photo stocks of people = no go) and remove the text and it'll be great. A tad sharp, but the it's fine that way.
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Rander is lq which is a shame. Otherwise, it's too messy and desperately needs some more attention on the focal point. You've got a bit of flow going, but the C4D at the right of the render breaks it to much for it to be viable. =/
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v good. Green C4D is alright that way. The only thing it needs is maybe a bit more contrast on and around the render, imo.
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Messy and chaotic as you said, though it's not that bad, it's just the placement of negative space that's a bit quirky. The neg space where the text is placed should be positioned further to the left, otherwise the pos/neg space difference is too equal on both sides, and symmetry is more often than not bad on sigs.
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p good too. The blurred C4D to the left irks me, but then again blurry stuff always irks me wether it fits or not.
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v v good. My only critique is that I would've liked to see a bit more of the city stock in the background.
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The only thing bad about this one is the render placement. Push it a bit more to the left and it'd be a great sig.
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