Tales of Salvation Fic Suggestions

[Fire_Thanatos]

Well, you guys from the Tales of Salvation crew already know... But I'm writing a fic based on the RP, and I'd like all of you to tell me suggestions.
Also, it'd be really helpful if you could make lists of all the events you want included (and even ones you don't but still remember ), since I don't have an awesome memory and I'm not about to read through 400 pages.
Anyway, I'm almost finished with the first chapter!
Oh, and I wasn't sure where to put this... If it should go into Fanart or Off-Topic or something, go on and move it.
Edit: I made a poll about whether to keep it from Aria's perspective or to alternate characters. ^_^ Aria will be easier and chapters would come faster, but alternate characters would be more interesting, I suppose. You choose.

[Light]

Let's see...

Survival Island

1. Our first meeting.
2. First fight (Andari and I)
3. The three island guardians
4. Ramtor's discovery
5. Ramtor's battle with us
6. Xipho's interruption

Tales of Salvation

1. Learning about Xipho
2. Tracking down Xipho
3. Infiltrating the city
4. Xipho destroying the city
5. The elemental trials
6. Discovery of new powers
7. War's beginning

Tales of Salvation 2

1. Group reunion
2. My summoning
3. Joining the Dezinin
4. Attack on Dezinin camp
5. Expulsion from the Dezinin
6. Full story of my past
7. Aeon's corruption and battle
8. Crystal consuming all armies
9. Piers and Aeon fight for the Nozu
10. Xipho is being tracked down
11. Battle with Xipho
12. Xipho's disappearance
13. Individual epiloques

Tales of Sakia: Trials of Eternity

Yet to be discovered...

[Aku]

Woah! @_@ You actually remembered that? Well, good for Fire! ^^;;
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[Fire_Thanatos]

o_O Thanks, that's a lot of information! I'll have to try and stick in all those explanations of the RP charas' pasts...
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[Light]

You would do well to include the character's bios as well, so the reader isn't confused as to what they look like, how strong they are, etc. And yes, I remembered that, because I am a VERY active role player in several different RPs all over the internet, and I think it's important to remember major events just in case you need to make references to them in a later part of the RP.

[Fire_Thanatos]

[Light]

Ah, don't say that. Most everyone who says that ends up being amazed at how great their works are considered by their reviewers.