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squidmaster64

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:03 pm Post subject: Tales of Unity |
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Kill your femboy, yoru. Kill it dead.
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Sometimes the best way to protect someone... is to kill them.
The two realms of existence have always had contact with each other. They keep to themselves for the most part--until there is a crime to be punished.
Carter Roloden, a common petty thief, takes one misstep that sends himself, his brother, Zemin, and five others into the heap of mysteries that surrounds their futures. Unraveling the events leads them to past secrets long since forgotten and tossed aside, driving them all to commit one fatal crime that puts both realms in jeopardy. But with the gods gone, they must find a way to restore the balance themselves...
Main cast
Carter Roloden
カルター · ロロデン
Sex: Male
Age: 18
Occupation: Thief
Weapon: Sword
Class: Melee/Healing
Carter's family is poor, so he steals from those better off than them to get by. He's extremely jumpy, and he cries at the smallest things as much as he does serious ones.
Belle Pensa
ベル · ペンサ
Sex: Female
Age: 17
Occupation: Missionary
Weapon: Twin Machetes
Class: Melee
Belle is happy with her job at the church and approaches almost everything with the same enthusiasm. When others are down, she tries to cheer them up, but she's also quick to snap if her patience is tried.
Clint
クリンツト
Sex: Male
Age: 14
Occupation: Guard
Weapon: Polearm
Class: Melee/Mage
A stoic and devoted guard, Clint is usually quiet, but he can open up when the right topic is presented. His brusque and somewhat awkward manner of wording things sometimes leaves others thinking he is upset.
Carcy Marranna
カーシ · マツランナ
Sex: Female
Age: 19
Occupation: Worker (docks/shipping)
Weapon: Fists
Class: Melee/Support
Carcy met Belle a few years ago, and the two optimists are good friends. She is a hard worker and prefers the sea to the farming town she grew up in. Carcy is popular with the locals, and she likes helping out others whenever she can, but everyone has their limits...
Neil Fordber
ニル · フォードベアー
Sex: Male
Age: 28
Occupation: Researcher
Weapon: Dakar (large shield-like boomerang)
Class: Ranged/Mage/Healing
Neil can go from quiet and secretive to maliciously upbeat in a matter of minutes. He is proud of his accomplishments, but he can't keep a secret unless the stakes are dire. He joins Carter's group for “in-depth field research.”
Brith Fordber
ブリス · フォードベアー
Sex: Female
Age: 16
Occupation: None
Weapon: Chain staff
Class: Ranged/Mage/Healing
Brith is Neil's younger sister. She is typically low-key, and she is quietly determined to complete everything she sets out to do. Brith seems to have a following despite not being particularly good with words.
Zemin Roloden
ゼメン · ロロデン
Sex: Male
Age: 28
Weapon: Fists
Class: Melee/Healing
Zemin moved away from Torta Savaar when he was Carter's age. He visits his family occasionally, and he has sworn to liberate them from poverty as soon as he can. He doesn't speak much of where he works or what he does, but his parents and younger sibling are confident that he'll pull through for them one day.
Minor characters
List will be updated as story progresses
Olni
Carter's mother. Her first son, Zemin, left home when he was 16, and two years later, she had Carter. Her third child was stillborn, and she is afraid that any more children would not only destroy her relationship with her remaining son but would present the opportunity for another loss.
Lark
Carter's father. He taught Carter the art of theft, though he's no master at it himself. He disapproves of Carter's skittish nature, but he doesn't try to remedy it. He wants more children; however, Olni refuses.
King Brial
The ruler of Torta Savaar and the surrounding area. He is a generally fair king, and he sees connecting with his subjects as an important part of his task. He handles even the most private of legal affairs personally, but there is only so much he can do despite the hardships his town has faced.
Enther Lorec
The head of Ardasia's Church of Vin, the largest Bilthoran church in the world. He is generally welcoming and kind to everyone, but sometimes he pushes his religion upon people a little too much. He, like most devout Bilthorans, holds a special contempt for Dithangrans.
Denny
Belle's father. He works with her at the Church of Vin. Denny is quite the prankster, and his antics have rubbed off on his daughter. Both are conservative with money even though they have more than enough to spare, so they live comfortably but not luxuriously. His wife died three years ago, but he and Belle have long since gotten over it.
Pascale
Carcy's mother. She has a total of seven children, and despite her smoking habit, she is fairly healthy. She and her husband run the family farm in Odell Village.
Realms
Dithangra
ジシャーングラ
Solos
Angale Field, the farmlands of the swamp
(Angale Swamp, home of the savages)
Fort Cathede, the beginning of the road
Torta Savaar, the capital port city
(Launt Road, the infamous bandit stretch)
(Comalte Center, the sterile lands)
(Verim Mines, the mountain camp)
Iramira
Melmu City, the resort central
(Melu Cove, the seaside maze)
Meneby
Evelda City, the manufacturing base
Calla Temple, the shrine of nature
(Calla Depths, the refuge of native life)
Aida City, the gardeners' lands
(Palace Gardens, Aida's heart and soul)
(Ohelio Desert, the treasure of the west)
(Temple of Jith, the end of the world)
Bilthora
ビルソーラ
Wirien
Odell Village, the bright plains
(Odell Forest, the luminous woods)
Post Maldec, the booming tradepost
Maldec Port, the shipping route
Oberin City, the city of technology
(Wastelands, the forsaken desert)
Gotia
(Kamburg Hold, the haunted warfront)
Rodda Base, the simple port
Ardull Point, the center of recreation
Ardasia City, the inland city
(Athor Swamp, the hostile grounds)
Catalon
(Gardall Temple, the land of Vin)
Vauron and Coronn, the twin capital cities
Katz Island, the peculiar settlement
(Temple of Vin, the beginning of the world)
These realms are not planets--they exist in the same space. Both worlds share landforms, rivers, and Pillars. Pillars are places where the opposite world's magic breaks through the boundary between them. They appear as waterfalls that reach the heavens in their dominant realm and as “stars” in the same place when viewed from the opposing world.
Magic
The Slipstream is the current of magic emerging from the Temple of Vin in the east and flowing to the Temple of Jith in the west. Water is the medium in which magic is the strongest. For 10 hours, the water is bright (“daytime”), and for 10 hours, it is dark (“nighttime”).
Dithangran magic is more powerful in Bilthora than it is in Dithangra (and vice versa).
Gods and Religion
Jith
ジス
The god of Dithangra.
Vin
ビン
The god of Bilthora.
The Holy Scroll, created when the worlds were, contains a documentation of the history since the beginning of time, and current events are continually being added. While present in both worlds, the text differs between them.
Both gods played a part in creating the worlds; however, they are considered detrimental to each other. Since Jith created the Dithangran half, he is the devil to Bilthorans (and vice versa). Magic is distributed by Bilthora and recycled by Dithangra, thus, if only one world existed, it would have a larger supply of magic.
There have been no major wars because Vin and Jith have made it nearly impossible to travel between the realms.
There are four Pillars in each realm. At either end of the Pillar, a spirit guards them, and until a pact is made, no one can travel to the opposite world from that Pillar. (For example, a Pillar in Dithangra is guarded by Efreet. Until a pact is made with Efreet, no one can travel through the Pillar; but if a pact is made, it would become possible to travel from Dithangra to Bilthora through that Pillar but not back through it.)
Pillar Guardians in Dithangra
Efreet
Volt
Gnome
Shadow
Pillar Guardians in Bilthora
Celsius
Undine
Sylph
Rem
Chapter list
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Skit list
"Travel" and "Cooking, Part I" (audio), II"
"Running Away" and "Cooking, Part II"
"Phobia" and "Unexpected"
"A Woman's Heart is only as Big as her Chest"
Chapter and skit list
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
"Travel" and "Cooking, Part I" (audio)
"Running Away" and "Cooking, Part II"
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
"Phobia" and "Unexpected"
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
"A Woman's Heart is only as Big as her Chest"
Chapter 8
VAs
Carter: Kevvie
"I said I wanted to go home; that's all! You offered to take me to Ardi-whatever!"
Belle: Zandra
"I'm only trying to help you. Let's go back to town, all right?"
Clint: open to those with manly voices
"You two need to be more careful. There are monsters here, and they don't care if you're paying attention or not..."
Carcy: open to those with even more obnoxious and girly voices
"Just one more thing... If you want me to come with you back south, why not pay my family a visit?"
Neil: Flamzeron
"I don't care if she's my sister. They'd look the same on a stranger, you know!"
Brith: Sakura1106
"Oh! Please don't grab me so suddenly... I wasn't expecting that."
Zemin: Kevvie
"This isn't what I wanted for you... For anyone. Just trust me, and I'll fix this mess the best I can."
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There you have it, clichés and all. If anything is worded funny, just let me know, and I'll be happy to clarify things. :') Or if it sucks way too much, someone please start a petition to lock this thread.
Sorry the art is so ugly. </3 I fail at drawing. D':
Thanks for reading if you got this far! (Or... just for clicking the link if you skimmed...! [I tried not to textwall, but sometimes it can't be helped...])
(PS: One more thing... If the fantasy names sound like I stole things from other fanstories, I apologize. I've already had to change one because another author and I had apparently used the same random generator, so if anything is a problem, please let me know. <3) _________________

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(Clearly, my current is not amazing. :( )
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Roadie

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:06 pm Post subject: |
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FIRST POST HOLDING
WILL EDIT IN REPLY NOW
Edit: I'll leave in the first part of the post for historial value.
Everything's looking good so far, Master. <3 Carter is still yes and Brith/Neil's designs are also very yes. <3 The cast looks like they'll be awesome.
| Quote: | | (Kamburg Hold, the haunted warfront) |
djfldsflkdjslkj DO WANT DO WANT
Like I said, I'm really excited to see more and I can't wait for the first chapter. Great work, Master! _________________
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squidmaster64

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:44 pm Post subject: |
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| Roadie wrote: | FIRST POST HOLDING
WILL EDIT IN REPLY NOW |
Epicness. You are everything amazing and some.
| Quote: | Edit: I'll leave in the first part of the post for historial value. :D
Everything's looking good so far, Master. <3 Carter is still yes and Brith/Neil's designs are also very yes. <3 The cast looks like they'll be awesome. |
lol thanks. <3
| Quote: | | Quote: | | (Kamburg Hold, the haunted warfront) |
djfldsflkdjslkj DO WANT DO WANT |
I put that in just for you. I had nothing better to do with that place. <3
Sword Dancer on second playthrough, anyone?
| Quote: | | Like I said, I'm really excited to see more and I can't wait for the first chapter. :) Great work, Master! |
It's been edited and re-edited and ready to go. <3 I'm going to wait until I get a few more replies, though. If I get more replies. o.o _________________

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Kevvie

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 10:16 pm Post subject: |
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Oooh, looks interesting, Squid. Can't wait to see the first chapter.
Also, I think I'll audition for some characters. Feel free to stop me 'cause I'm terrible.  _________________
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Zandra

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 10:21 pm Post subject: |
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| Kevvie wrote: | Also, I think I'll audition for some characters. Feel free to stop me 'cause I'm terrible.  |
Lies, Kevvie. Lies. Stop saying your horrible already. I already said this, but if you think you are so horrible, why do you voice characters in the first place?
Anyway, I'll audition for someone...I could probably do male voices as well.  _________________
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squidmaster64

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 10:26 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for the comments, guys. <3 Constant refreshing will make a person desperate, haha.
| Kevvie wrote: | Oooh, looks interesting, Squid. Can't wait to see the first chapter. :wink:
Also, I think I'll audition for some characters. Feel free to stop me 'cause I'm terrible. :( |
No, I think your voice is really sexy. <3 I put up some audition lines for you.
| Quote: | | Anyway, I'll audition for someone...I could probably do male voices as well. |
I'd love to hear any and all auditions. :D <3 _________________

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 10:28 pm Post subject: |
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Notsupposedtobeon...
I'll be keeping an eye on this. Trying to catch up with Cadence while traveling, so I should be able to keep up here once I finish that.  |
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I shall be stalking this like the plague. _________________
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 11:05 pm Post subject: |
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| Tamad wrote: | | I shall be stalking this like the plague. |
Not sure what this means but...this.
Or at least try...with school starting up and everything. _________________
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squidmaster64

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 11:11 pm Post subject: |
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Ah, hello, guys~ I'm honored. ////
@AbyssPurple: Ugh, school. I'm going to have to juggle it as well. Darn school. Darn it to heck. _________________

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Zandra

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O.k, Squiddy, no offense...but your side profiles look kind of funky. I think everyone's jaws are too long. That, and generally, after the bottom lip, there is a curve, and then one's chin. Giving you crit because you gave me some. <3
Edit: Zemin is fine. The other...see above. _________________
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squidmaster64

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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:54 am Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | I think I'll audition too. |
Cool.
| Zandra wrote: | O.k, Squiddy, no offense...but your side profiles look kind of funky. I think everyone's jaws are too long. That, and generally, after the bottom lip, there is a curve, and then one's chin. Giving you crit because you gave me some. <3
Edit: Zemin is fine. The other...see above. |
...That's it. I was wondering why the hell they looked so sh*tty, but you pinpointed it in a second. <3 I'll fix them asap. Thanks so much~ _________________

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Zandra

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| squidmaster64 wrote: | | ...That's it. I was wondering why the hell they looked so sh*tty, but you pinpointed it in a second. <3 I'll fix them asap. Thanks so much~ |
I draw side-profiles a lot. I've learned. Though...mouths still give me problems. _________________
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squidmaster64

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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 3:43 am Post subject: |
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| Zandra wrote: | | I draw side-profiles a lot. I've learned. Though...mouths still give me problems. |
Faces in general are kind of a pain. </3 But I think that's why I love drawing so much. It's a challenge.
...Ugh. After all that trouble I went through to copy and paste the kana from a chart since I can't type it out... The forums go an resize all the characters and wind up screwing with the "tsu"s. Grr that's going to drive me mad until I find some way to fix it...
Edit: I was going to post the first chapter after work tomorrow, but whatever, it's technically 49 minutes into Tuesday, so that's close enough.
Also, I can double post in my own thread because I said so. It'll make life easier when looking through the chapter lists. _________________

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