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Peatrical Systems
Joined: 25 Jul 2004 Posts: 4904 Location: Sitting on a porch, I see you, but you don't wave...
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Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2004 8:33 pm Post subject: |
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I saw this one scribbled somewhere on the internet, author unknown:
"Streams
Life continues everyday, a never ending road that chooses not where it goes….
Is it pushed on by the cruelty of time?
That irreversible beast that causes grief and pain?
Every time we make a choice a life ends and a new begins….
Pain and suffering, remorse and regret…
All appear all to often on this downward spiral….
Time rushes on like a river of no return
A river running always, flowing continually
It is a joining of streams – individuals hopes and dream
Individuals fears and pains
It causes us to regret, want another chance….
Another chance which never will be granted
A river of life, made from the lives of others…….
A stream of society
Life is like a Stream that we shape, a stream that follows us where we go…
It adds our ebb to the tide
When our time is through will that stream conform?
Perhaps it will run against the tide,
try to beat the river of life?
Is it possible for a stream to surpass a river?
A river accumulated from our wills, our dreams, our hopes….
The hopes and dreams, the fears and regrets, a river formed by all….
All who enter and leave theirs behind..
Do they have the right to decide? " - Unknown
Somewhat interesting, I like the anology of us all being streams that make a river which is the world. _________________ Listen here buddy, the grapes aren't for you! |
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Hero of courage

Joined: 02 May 2004 Posts: 11614 Location: Québec, Canada.
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Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2004 8:40 pm Post subject: |
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I wrote these for Morwen in another topic
My little cometh
Looking at the stars, I think of you,
Like a cometh whom blasts throught the stratosphere
Your kindness soared right into my heart.
Still, I could not open up to you, what was is it that I fear?
Perhpas it was the fear to be loved.
Fear of the unknown
Yet, you have brought me feelings I though lost
I was too cold to love, to cry, my hearth was filled with frost.
I will remain by you always
Until my final days
All I seek is to be your guardian angel
So you can live the life of a noble
First kiss under the stars
How can I bring you by my side?
Like a knight in shining armor, accompany me into a kiss’s ride
Will you be my first kiss
Grant me this bliss?
We could meet under the stars!
Into a tight embrace so you can heal my scars
With your care and love
Into your heart my desire I will shove
Make it last forever
Love making me feel as though a pleasant fever
It feels like a mysterious power
This intricate feeling that binds us together
All I wish for is to be thine
And you to be mine
Do you feel this way too?
Because that is my dream of a first kiss with you. _________________ "Taiyz: What the heck! You posted something! That's CRAZY. Downright INSANE, even." |
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Betaku

Joined: 06 Aug 2004 Posts: 2534 Location: Enter The Mars Volta
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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2004 11:52 pm Post subject: |
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I know I am not a poet...and that this is probably horrible...but I decided to give it a shot. Don't really have a title...so...yeah. Anyways...here it goes. ^^
Where were you when I needed you most?
I looked everywhere,
But there was nothing
I thought I had lost you.
I felt so alone, so cold.
Until the warmth of you held me,
Telling me that everything would be alright.
Now I know that you have always been there with me.
In the one place I never bothered to look.
For you have always dwelled within me.
Right there, inside my heart. _________________ ~Betaku~
Woof woof!
DOGGY!!! AHHH!!!! GET AWAY!!!!!
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Nali

Joined: 23 Jul 2004 Posts: 8645
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:24 am Post subject: |
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I'm to scared to post anything of mine....only two or three people have seen ONE of my poems and ONE person has seen another poem I wrote just for her. _________________
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Betaku

Joined: 06 Aug 2004 Posts: 2534 Location: Enter The Mars Volta
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:26 am Post subject: |
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I haven't seen any of them... -_- ...I see how it is. Nyah! hehe...anyways...they can't be any worse than mine. hehe ^^ _________________ ~Betaku~
Woof woof!
DOGGY!!! AHHH!!!! GET AWAY!!!!!
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caramelpopcorn

Joined: 01 May 2004 Posts: 6321 Location: good ole' US of A
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:29 am Post subject: |
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Whenever I write poetry, I write something humorous. XD I hardly write those deep, profound stuff! ^^0 Btw, nice poems, everyone! _________________
++all gud mario game++ (Finally, I updated a bit!) |
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Betaku

Joined: 06 Aug 2004 Posts: 2534 Location: Enter The Mars Volta
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:31 am Post subject: |
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I usually write humorous poems for school because they are so much easier for me to write. No thought required. hehe...I should show some of my old ones.
As for my poem I posted, unlike Hero...I won't reveal who that poem is meant for so nyah! hehe _________________ ~Betaku~
Woof woof!
DOGGY!!! AHHH!!!! GET AWAY!!!!!
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Nali

Joined: 23 Jul 2004 Posts: 8645
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:38 am Post subject: |
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Post some of your old poems Betaku _________________
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ToS_sheena

Joined: 24 Jul 2004 Posts: 332 Location: Ontario, Canada
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:38 am Post subject: |
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All of the poems here are so good Mine are those funny 5-liners. I still like mine, but I hardly ever write any. _________________
ToS owns, so does Sheena! |
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oblique

Joined: 19 Aug 2004 Posts: 2738 Location: I'm not sure.. I'm kind of lost.
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:41 am Post subject: |
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There once was a very dumb guy,
who decided to calculate pi
to the very last digit,
but he started to fidget,
when he realized before that he'd die!
Thank yew very much, I'll be here all week. _________________ I wanted freedom
bound and restricted
I tried to give you up
but I'm addicted
now that you know I'm trapped sense of elation
you'd never dream of
breaking this fixation - Muse |
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caramelpopcorn

Joined: 01 May 2004 Posts: 6321 Location: good ole' US of A
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:46 am Post subject: |
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OMG I looooove limericks. *glomps oblique* _________________
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Betaku

Joined: 06 Aug 2004 Posts: 2534 Location: Enter The Mars Volta
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:48 am Post subject: |
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| oblique wrote: | There once was a very dumb guy,
who decided to calculate pi
to the very last digit,
but he started to fidget,
when he realized before that he'd die!
Thank yew very much, I'll be here all week. |
lolz...I made one just like that. Exact same type of poem..just doesn't make too much sence. hehe...*goes away from his love poetry*
There once lived a man in a shoe.
But now he lives here with me too.
He once saw a deer,
and looked in the mirror,
And Hey! He looks something like you. _________________ ~Betaku~
Woof woof!
DOGGY!!! AHHH!!!! GET AWAY!!!!!
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Mirage

Joined: 01 Sep 2004 Posts: 6361 Location: On the edge
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:51 am Post subject: |
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Lost
I wonder the forest
Looking for the lost soul.
Where had it gone to?
Its so lost...
Lost, just like me...
Lost from reality...
eh, not the best ive done but its okay. ^^ _________________
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oblique

Joined: 19 Aug 2004 Posts: 2738 Location: I'm not sure.. I'm kind of lost.
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:53 am Post subject: |
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There once was a girl named caramel,
Who I always thought had blond hair-amel,
She loves limericks as well,
As a friend she's quite swell,
And as a mod she's always been fair-amel! _________________ I wanted freedom
bound and restricted
I tried to give you up
but I'm addicted
now that you know I'm trapped sense of elation
you'd never dream of
breaking this fixation - Muse |
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caramelpopcorn

Joined: 01 May 2004 Posts: 6321 Location: good ole' US of A
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 1:09 am Post subject: |
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XD XD XD
There once was a guy named oblique
Who wrote limericks that were quite unique
The last one was odd
About me, the mod
But I think it was magnifique.  _________________
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