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ESP Sheena



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PostPosted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 6:24 pm    Post subject: funniness 2 Gnomey! Reply with quote
This is a story I wrote while I was supposed to be reading in school. It's a little hard to read. It has six pages so far but I'm gonna' start with one tell me if you want more.
Warning: it's a bit violent
http://img24.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img24&image=gnomeypg14we.jpg
you were warned
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 9:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
You've got a really creative idea, but work on your descriptions and imagery.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 11:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Indeed I like it though,8/10.
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