Sanic
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 Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2012 11:21 pm Post subject: What does the community think of my OC? |
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Name: Ghardin Nasakii
Hometown: Ashacawu (North Kushinawa)
Age: 18
Height: 5'10
Race: Kushinawan
Occupation: Soldier
Weapon(s): Two handed sword, axe, fists/feet
Appearance: Kushinawans tend to have hair colors with the pigment of red (orange, purple, pink, etc). The most common hair color is crimson, which is the color of Ghardin's bowl cut hair, with a few spikes on the bottom side, which is long enough to reach his forehead, but not his eyebrows. The eyebrows are also crimson. His eye color is dark green. He has a slight muscular tone from carrying two handed weapons with one hand, but it is not enough for him to be considered a body builder. His skin tone is slightly dark, but is still considered white. His casual wear consists of blue jeans which are about a size wider than him, and a short sleeve shirt, usually red, as well as brown sneakers (he actually thinks this outfit is fashionable). His military outfit consists of black sweatpants, with white lines on its leg sides. The long sleeve shirt is also black. A jacket is often worn over the shirt. It is of a black tone, with a cybernetic style red paint job. The jacket is long enough to reach the knees of the average wearer. The sneakers are of a white tone, while the bottom is grey.
Personality: Ghardin is often a show off in fighting, since he weilds the heavy weapons with one hand only. Often, he would harshly insult his enemies/rivals, and when he catches them, he tortures them in special ways. He also acts cold among others, including his comrades, and as such, he is often a loner. Ghardin is often known to get into fights a lot, especially in bars and taverns. Often, before the police arrest him, they shoot him with tasers designed specifically to take him down. More than often, he thinks he's right about what he says, and this leads to a load of problems for the team to handle. Once, he was thrown in jail for punching a political leader.
History: Ghardin was once a gentle person before, at the age of 6, his parents were murdered while he was in kindergarten. He was later sent to a foster home, where he was bullied for a few months. For the final month, he decided to take on the bullies. He grabbed one by the throat and punched with enough force to give the bully a concussion. He took a shovel and broke a kidney and a kneecap of the other bully. Finally, he grabbed a pocket knife, and stabbed out the last bully's eye. Since then, the whole foster home feared and hated him. Ghardin was sent to Juvenile prison. Ghardin then decided to train for the military, for the delight of hurting others and because joining the military is a high paying job. Kushinawans are often in poverty, and Ghardin was no exception.
Fighting Style: Ghardin, like many other Kushinawan soldiers, has the ability to transform his weapons into liquid and place it into special containers with heat absorbing properties that aluminum has. He has two said containers, one for his sword and another for his axe. Although he carries these weapons with one hand, he isn't exactly strong enough to do so, and as such, he is almost as slow as a snail. He is twice as fast with bare hands, although it's not saying much. His artes are, for the most part, powerhouse attacks instead of combo attacks.
List of artes:
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Base artes:
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-Sword:
Demonic Assualt (send out a large projectile with short range)
Lightning Blade (Thrust while sending down lightning)
Blitz (Strike down, then up)
Bloody piercing (Stick a sword into the opponent, then throw him/her)
Saber clash (throw the sword at the enemy, then transition to fists/feet)
Swallow blade (Jump, kick twice, then crash down)
Raging Blast (Send out a powerful charged shockwave)
Dermal cutter (slice with a light but sharp attack)
Cannon Strike (Strike the sword upward with a paralyzing blast)
-Axe:
Destruction (Jump, then send down a shockwave)
Lightning thrash (Jump, then send down lightning and a shockwave)
Ausbruch (Slash, then send out an outburst)
Beast (send out a powerful shockwave in the form of a lion)
Axe clash (throw the axe at the enemy, then transition to fists/feet)
-Fists/feet:
Satan's field (cause various status effects to enemies around)
Regain sword (Transform the liquid sword into a solid, then transition to Sword)
Regain axe (Transform the liquid axe into a solid, then transition to axe)
Shadow Rush (Charge and punch with the speed of sound)
-Every weapon:
Shoulder hurl (Throw the enemy to the opposite side)
Counter (Guard and reflect a projectile)
-magic skills
Lightning (send down lightning)
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Master artes:
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-Sword:
Thunder Explosion (Jump, then crash into the land with a mighty lightning shockwave)
Holy Ray (Send down a ball of light that shoots out multiple lasers)
Limited (Shoot out a laser with a slightly obtuse angle)
Epidermal buster (Slice twice, the second slice being twice as powerful)
Fire wave (swing the sword with a fiery blast)
Super Sonic Thrust (Send out a powerful thrust)
Mirror Clash (Reflect a powerful projectile, such as a laser beam)
Guardian Field (Send out a barrier that heals allies and harms enemies)
Light Spear Cannon (Slash the enemy upward while striking in the same direction)
-Axe:
Heavy Tiger Blade (Knock the enemy down with a powerful dual slash)
Lion Rage (Combined blasts of Beast and Raging Blast)
Lead Cannon (Strike the now poisonous axe to the enemy)
-Fists/feet:
Neck injury (Choke the enemy. Tilting the control stick will result in a directional throw)
Roaring Havoc (Send out a powerful roundhouse kick)
Raging Thunder Explosion (Combine lighting with Raging Blast)
Destructive Axe Swing (Send down a rock elemental shockwave via an axe kick)
-Every weapon:
Dual counter (Guard and reflect a projectile two times)
-Magic skills
Thunder Blade (Send down a blade of lightning)
Spark Wave (Send out a sphere of lightning)
Quicksilver (Send out a poisonous liquid radius)
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Arcane artes:
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-Sword:
Fracture (slice three times. The last hit cripples the enemy)
-Axe:
Satan's Fang (Send out a projectile of large radius)
Heavy Tiger Rage (Knock opponents away with three consecutive attacks)
-Fists/feet:
Disruption (Send out a green round sphere that destroys anything in its path, including the user)
Bloody Iron (Sacrife HP to buff attack power and hitstun)
Dark Space (Punch out a laser of darkness)
-Every weapon:
Dragon Swarm (Spawn both the axe and sword, and swing)
Punishing Counterstrike (Guard and transform the opposing projectile into a massive shockwave)
Violent Summer (Charge up a series of electrical waves, then release)
-Magic skills:
Gravity Well (Send out a power that disrupts Gravity)
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Mystic artes:
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-Sword:
Capital Punishment (Send out a cross on the enemy while striking the sword at it)
-Axe:
Manmade ceiling (Send out a greenish glassy ceiling)
Disruptive Lance (Charge the axe into a large lance, then penetrate the enemy with it, while sticking it onto the manmade ceiling)
-Fists/feet:
Confrontation (Punch the rival fist/feet user, and the rival does it back, turning into a competition of who has the stronger arm)
The Grand Sphere (Punch out a deadly laser of darkness at the charging enemy) |
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