Final Fantasy: Secret Of El Ephermia (Sign ups/Discuss)

Goddess Martel · Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:57 pm Post subject:

Wait, didn't we discuss this before?

Lucille and Levi were childhood friends since they both lived in Herba Fields, remember? @.@

I can't beleive they wouldn't know each other despite living in the exact same village.

Anyway, as long as you understand. Some people just hate character control so I made it as one of the rules to not use Character control on any characters that aren't your own.

But I guess we could count Dr. Murdock as your own though.
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RenegadeNick27 · Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:33 pm Post subject:

ok. i dont think we talked about them being friends, but i do understand the idea of them living in the same village.

and in the rules i cant change Thantos's fate, since i controled his reaction to Murdock. you were talking about him brfore right?

also i think im going to have a lingering effect of the medecine, Levi wont be able to speak for a while after he wakes up, cuz the medecine basicly fried his throte. he will have to wait fer it to heal.
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Goddess Martel · Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:49 pm Post subject:

Akashic · Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 8:25 pm Post subject:

RenegadeNick27 · Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 8:33 pm Post subject:

ok i think i get thr picture, thanks for the insight. i might make a bio fer Merdock too, so i have someone in the Aeon empire to futz with ill probably have it up by the end of the night. Smile

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Doctor Murdock

Gender: Male

Age: 36

Race: human

Birthplace: Aeon Empire

Eye color: Fiery orange

Hair color: dirty dark brown

Occupation: Sage. He is highly respected with his medical serums and potions; they are top of the class.

Faithful to: Aeon

Weaponry: none. But he will use the occasional standard sword or gun; he does not have a very good knack for fighting like the soldiers.

Personal Details/History: he wears a white lab coat like most doctors and has a green sweater under it with a pair of grey dress pants. He is considered very kind with to patients, but after Thantos appointed him to the Omega medical center, he has been seeing many more prisoners than patients. He feels awkward being kind to prisoners, so he has begun to mask his usual kindness with burning harshness.

As a boy Murdock was a runt. He had little friends and a small build. He spent most of his time indulged in school, and he was fascinated on how a simple herb could heal or build a person’s strength. After school ended he headed towards a doctors degree in medicine. He became a local sage until one of the nobles was shot down outside his home. he rushed out with an experimental potion and saved the Nobel from what else would have been a bloody death.

After his heroism the grateful noble introduced him to a colonel in the Aeon army and they got him into an extravagant lab where he could create potions with nearly unlimited materials. his work did not go unnoticed. Not long after general Thantos had summoned him to meet him, but “only if you consider yourself to be a truly amazing sage”. Once Thantos had cleared the room of any other medics or anyone with an idea of first aid, he reached for his sword.

Murdock watched as Thantos sliced a big chunk of skin off his arm and chuckled. Murdock ran on an instinct to help him, he gathered herbs out of his bag and started to treat Thantos. Within an hour Thantos was fully treated,there was no scar or anything, Murdock had fully healed him back to full health and Thantos left stronger than he was entering. From then on Murdock had been working on the Omega, Thantos’s air ship, as the head of medicine. He treats the higher rank soldiers, and “special” prisoners. all his time on the Omega with Thantos began to corrupt him, and he began to create deadly, and torturous poisons, along with his famous potions.
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Goddess Martel · Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 9:33 pm Post subject:

Yup, pretty much what Akashic said.

And no problem, at least now you know. ^-^

Anyways, I've checked the bio and it clears out, so I'll add him to the Antogonist list. ^^
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RenegadeNick27 · Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 2:18 am Post subject:

o my god

. Thantos is going to kill the guy who forgot to take the tool bag Laughing

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Goddess Martel · Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:45 pm Post subject:

LOL

Most likely yes, that soilder won't be getting his paycheck anytime soon. =3

You'd be surprise what one can do with a tool bag of tools. =3
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RenegadeNick27 · Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:04 pm Post subject:

lol, also this next post of mine was very close to yours, so when i went to paste it onto the page, and i had to do a quick scan of yours to make shure i wasnt contradicting anything.

and also, what is with my posts starting a new page, this is like the third page i have started in the RP Rolling Eyes

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Akashic · Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:16 pm Post subject:

Boo, I wanted to get the next page... XD jkjk. Each page holds 15 posts, so if you count them, you can tell when another page is going to start.
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RenegadeNick27 · Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 11:06 pm Post subject:

really, i thought there was a space limit
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Akashic · Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 11:22 pm Post subject:

Sorry, didn't mean to put it that way. ^^;; (had to look up what you meant)
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Goddess Martel · Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 1:27 am Post subject:

Meh, I guess it depends on the length of the post. At least that's how I always saw it. ^^;

Ah, I just noticed something. ^^;

Renegade, in your post, you mentioned Levi got Lucille and the others out, but Lucille had already gotten out using a screwdriver and Arlen had cut the bars of the cells open with his sword after Lucille unscrewed the bolts of the bars. Hence freeing Elef, Mog and Levi (I'll explain at a later point why his sword can cut metal)

Also, there was no other people other than the main characters. I understand the soilder part though. =3

Sorry, if I sound annoying. But I have this thing about keeping things in order in the story. ^^;
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RenegadeNick27 · Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 1:42 am Post subject:

i swear i did not see that earlier.... ugg i think i know what happened. u and Phychon posted while i was writing, and the only change i saw was untill u posted at the end of the page.

well what am i supposed to do now Confused

i think changing the part about getting the keys could change. and was it really spesified that they were the only ones in the brig? that would be odd due to the cruleness of Thantos. do u think that would work

ok i changed my post a bit so you guys get yourselves out and levi gives the other prisoner a knife.

there might be a bit of a bump when you say

Goddess Martel · Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2010 2:14 am Post subject:

Yeah, they were the only ones there. I know Thanatos is pictured up as a heartless sadist (and he is XD) but they haven't been anywhere else other than Herba fields to pick that guy up.

So there would be no point as to why someone like him was there in the first place.

Anyway, yeah, I could remove the 'Levi' part myself. ^^

But you will have to somewhat change the rest. The part with the soilder was fine though. ^^
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