Fanfic:Reliving childhood (chapter 6/fanart) *spoilers*

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kinda new here and stuff but ahh well let's see how i manage with this
so yes this is my first tales of symphonia fanfiction it'll be written in script format and just about every main/ (including main NPC *yuan*) will be showing in this: hope you all enjoy!

and attention all: this fan fiction can now be found on ff.net XD for easy access and so it doens't get lost in the replies, here it is:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3410104/1/

Reliving Childhood
Summary: Once every 6000 years a mysterious comet crashes down on the land of Aselia. Once every 6000 years, a strange phenomenon occurs and brings strange effects to anyone who crosses path with it. An event which will send both the eternal heroes and the two remaining seraphim into a whirlwind of chaos and perhaps a whole new adventure...

Prologue:
Peace has been restored, the worlds reunited and the age of both lifeless beings and mana lineage of chosens has ended. The eternal swordsman and his companions have brought about a new beginning for the worlds and a bright future with the Yggdrasill Tree. Though worn and tired, the eternal heroes part ways to begin their own personal missions to not only end remaining discrimination but to also ensure that history will not repeat itself in the future years to come. However, a bright purple star is seen descending onto the land and with its coming, the beginning of another journey will follow shortly after.

*We enter into the scene with the world of Aselia as a new day is about to start. At the ruins of the tower to Salvation a bright light appears on the cracked warp pad and a figure is seen appearing. In a flash, the figure grows wings and with a breeze blowing his messy auburn hair, he flies off towards Iselia with anxiety on his face as he flaps a small pair of clear blue wings*
???: ARG! How the hell did Mithos even manage to lift his scrawny self with these....small frail things?! ...How could he even fly with them?!*pants* dammit...I have to hurry and manage to reach Lloyd and fast! I can’t allow Aselia to be thrown in chaos again after we worked so hard to save it! I just hope that stupid half-elf moron was correct with his information…..
(Flashback time!)
*on Welgaia, the city of the angels, the area within the desolate comet, we see a lone figure standing before the computer; his arms crossed as he stares at the projected image of a blue haired half-elf*
???: So Lloyd is doing fine then on his journey?
??: *nods* he’s been collecting the expheres for almost a year now with that ditzy- I mean with the blonde chosen of Sylvarant. He’s currently holding a get together at Dirk’s with the others
???: Did you find that out through the Renegades, Yuan?
Yuan: actually, Lloyd sent an invitation to the triet base, one of the men discovered it outside my office door….though it still perplexes me as to how his teeny brain could understand the base’s technology….
???: *smirks* yes well you did always have the worst security, and i do speculate as to how you managed to stay alive for two thousands years undercover, if an average 17 year old managed to outwit the “brillant self proclaimed genius”and his stooges..though they always say that followers usually take after their leader most of the time...
Yuan: *glares* I’m telling you that it was dumb luck and the only reason that brat managed it was because of the system upgrade that was being done in the base’s central computer. As if your one to talk though. Who was it again that allowed Lloyd’s group to slip right under his nose in Welgaia? I wonder who that could have been, Kratos
Kratos: hmph, I kept telling Mithos the computer's communication were broken but he insisted they were fine….
Yuan: sure blame the midget for your mistake…*gives a faint smirk but turns serious* you know, it’s not too late to transport back here…Derris Kharlan is still in orbit and it'll probably take some years before it leaves completely...i could set up a link from the tower of salvation's warp and..
Kratos: *sighs* Yuan, you know as well as I do that it’s not possible now….lloyd has his journey as I have my own…I highly doubt he requires my guidance anymore
Yuan: That may be true, but you forget that any kid, no matter how old, will always require their parent……
Kratos:…..I appreciate the offer Yuan but I can’t… it’s for the best..
Yuan: *snorts* and of course the “best” is to remain on a ‘ lousy dust ball’ for eternity instead of being with your son who missed his father for a good portion of his life
Kratos: ......Just inform me of anything else that happens to Lloyd, the communication system should remain operational for another year or so
Yuan: yea, yea just make sure not to ask anything else from me….it’s bad enough you’re having me do your job here along with assisting those idiots
Kratos: you must be having loads of fun babysitting then, thought then again you always seem to be stuck with these kinds of tasks….perhaps Mithos was correct with his assumption two years ago of you being...
Yuan: you repeat that and you'll end up in millions of pieces with that damn comet. I still have the mana cannon working and unless you wish to have an early death then do the world a favor and shut up, yuan out *screen turns off*
(Flashback ends: back to present)
Kratos: *tries to land but ends up tumbling into the ground and crashing directly into a tree. Cursing, the small ten year old dusts off his clothes, consisting of a white shirt and blue pants, and starts running towards Dirk’s house* ‘I hope I’m not too late, please, origin let me make it’
(Dirk’s house comes into view and while it’s standing a giant hole is in the roof of the wooden house)
Kratos: *runs faster and slams the door open* LLOYD!!---- …….???!!!
*directly in the center of the house is a abnormal glowing purple rock the size of a baseball. Around the wooden pieces and scattered about are six little toddlers with two small babies sitting on the floor with a white and green fish flapping in the center; there cries being heard in all different directions.*
Kratos: *slaps his forehead* Martel no, please say I’m dreaming…
*A mini version of Lloyd crawls over and is laughing; his normal red shirt too big and dragging on the floor*
Lloyd: bebebahaha…dadda?
Kratos:…..*cracks one eye open and stares at the small tot. A minute of silence is held in the air before a loud scream of frustration can be heard throughout the land*

(End prologue: start chapter one)

(yes I know, kratos does seem out of character but can you blame the guy? He’s off in Derris Kharlan minding his own business when all of a sudden, BOOM! He’s now a mere ten year old and discovers his son and friends as mere kids. If any person can keep his cool after some bizarre incident like that then do let me know =)
*ahem* i know the beginning may be a bit lacking but beginnings were never my strong point *shrugs*. The idea came to me one day and though it may not be that original it’s my attempt at a Symphonia fan fiction. There will really be no pairings in this but you people may take this however you want *whether you see some *cough yaoi-hints cough* or even some pairing hints.
Please read and comment I will try to have this updated as often as I can and if you people have any advice then please feel free to give some. *if i make any mistakes then please inform of that as well* Other then that I hope you all enjoy this and fear not! Yuan will be in the next chapter *smiles and holds up a sign saying in big letters “Yuan fan” *laughs* though not in the bad way
and i do wonder where kratos was going with his previous comment to our friend =) )
P.S. *takes out another sign and nails it to the house reading “Dirk's on vacation” )

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Hi welcome to the forums!

I like the plot! Is this just Chapter 1? Or is this a one-shot?
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hello to you to
if this was a one-shot then i must say that it's very short and really lacking lolz
actually it's a continuing thing that's going to be some chapters long (not sure it depends on where i go with it)

glad you like it and thanks for taking the time to comment Red_Icon1000

[koinekid]

Interesting. I've seen one fic where Lloyd was changed into a toddler, but this is the first that I know about where all the cast is changed. (and I think the Lloyd toddler one was discontinued). Curious to see where you go with this.
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[koinekid]

It was on mediaminer. There's less than a dozen ToS fics there and that was one of them. I don't think the author did much with the concept, however.
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LOL baby lloyd!

Welcome to the forums!

I really like the idea of this, i don't think ive seen anything like it...
Any way keep going! I'm interested to see where this is going...
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[Dark Dog]

Wow, the first chapter was SO cool, this looks very interesting! =D

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Okay unfortunatly this isn't chapter two *avoids tomatoes being thrown by random people* but this is something that is IMPORTANT TO THE STORY so please read this (i was going to attach it to chapter two but it'll make it too long otherwise.) It's basically stating the character's ages and outfits so it'll give everyone a nice visual of what people are wearing and what ages (the only two not mentioned are yuan and kratos cause i'll be using them mostly and there's will just be explained throughout the storyline) Chapter two will be posted today or tomorrow so enjoy the information guys!

Lloyd: 2 years; matching brown outfit with a two layered light jacket connecting at the collar
Zelos: 3 1/2 years; short sleeved white shirt and pants with a reddish sleevless vest that buttons up with toogle loops and horned shaped buttons
Regal: 4 years; plain light blue shirt with dark navy pants
Genis:under a year; small pair of blue overalls with a white turtleneck underneath
Sheena: 3 years; (for now; her outfit will change later) has one a rose pink romper ( polo collar+culottes combo; fused shirt/shorts one piece). Tied over it is a lavender colored bathrobe to look like a mini kimono ( she's a ninja afterall)
Raine: 4 years; a orange turtleneck dress that goes down to her knees with a hood attached to the back and a small sash tied around the waist
Colette: 2 years; a light breezy green sumer dress with flower patterns scattered across
Presea:under a year; pink one-piece footed pajamas with small yellow ducks and white sheep patches (will probably have a white blanket with her)

X_x that killed me there but it's now done. For outfits i'm not good at describing them and i got lot of help from this costume encylopedia manga book. If it seems vague or you can't understand then just use your imagination. (also i know they don't sound like symphonia outfits but if it try to atempt that then i'm afraid my brain will go bye bye an fry out ^_^; )
Those are the ages i chose for now but in the story if it seems like i'm making one of the characters too young for their age or too old then comment and suggest the age i should use instead (though keep in mind that even if their kids i'm still going to keep some of their personality traits Ex: genis being smart for his age, cause we all know he's a genius, ect)
with that said hope you all enjoy the information and look foward to chapter two
thanks for reviewing!

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Cool information Epiclesis! All the ages seem right to me. It's your fic so do whatever you want!


BTW, Chapter 4 of crimson morning is up, so check it out when you get a chance!
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Ok, sounds good!
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