Poetry Topic

[angelfeathers]

I want you to write me a poem (4/20/06)

I want you to write me a poem,
with details on how you'll kiss me
on how you adore me obsessively
from each whim of my gestures
from breaths I inhale,to the curls of my hair
I want you to write me a poem,
a line for every time you think of me
and cherish me excessively
for every angle of my love for you,
I'd want you to write me a poem
with details on how you'll cheat death for me,
and be in my life's grasp and laugh knowingly
the fact that you won't lose me if
--you wrote me a lovely poem
And I want you to write me a poem
with a story of a faerie with wings,
of a magical forest with as many trees
as there are blades of grass on the fields of dreams,
and for every glistering mountain peak that you see there,
above faint clusters of ice crystals aware
of each drop of violet dripping from the evening sky,
I'd want you to write me a poem
and dedicate it to the love of your life
and maybe the apple of your eye
will want to write you a poem,
on how much she'll kiss you
and smile at you longingly
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Twisted Fairytale (3/09/06)
I've been razor blade kissed
on my wrist and like this,
I will be kissed on the lips
by my cold nightingale prince
Oh slaughter me
like the insolent princess I should be
Lock me in the chamber of Queens
and Spades,I will pierce my tormenting dreams
with my razor blade kisses.
Mirror Mirror,with your cold steel stare
from which angle of my heart should I tear?
Will I be swept off my feet? Or
Will my crimson strings forever weep?
No one hears me scream
Oh razor blade kiss
How tender is your touch
You drench me with blood lust
as I dance on top the carvings on brimstone.
A dark pool surrounds me.
"Oh,thy death shall comfort thee"
Oh razor blade kisses,won't you kiss me one more time?
Un lace my delicate weakness and make my trance obsolete
Let my life leak,oh sweet blade of mine..sweet blade of mine
Taint the contract with blood and agree to forget this twisted fairy tale.
I sold my soul to the devil,for my promising release.
Oh,my razor blade kiss...
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Thar :E
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[Solez]

These poems are all so powerful!
It's another area of poetry completely to what I do.

But I'm sticking to my brand. It's still poetry.
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[Mirage]

Untitled?

Even though I feel lost,
I know that I can turn to you.
You hold me in your arms
whenever I need comfort.
You are always there when
I don't feel good.
You listen to the problems
that I bottle up deep within myself.
You let me burden you with all
my problems that I can't solve.
And I am grateful...
So grateful that I think I have fallen.

Pain

Heavy breathing, heart thumping.
I can hear myself gasping for air.
I fear that my end has come near.
My vision blurs, I can't see ahead of me.
Help me... help me...
I try to cry... I try...
But nothing comes out...
I fear... I fear...
Make it stop... my pain... my agony...
I can't take it any more...
I can't live this way...

Broken Promises

Have I told you how many times
I have loved you?
Have I ever told you that I feel safe
when you are around?
Have I let you know that I think
that we belong together?
I know that I have... I know that
you know how much I love you.
But why do you go behind my back?
And break the promise... the bond
that held us together?
Why did you risk all of it for a single drink...
a single night...
Why? ... why?
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Disruptive Silence

[angelfeathers]

Waiting for a Rhythmic Heartbeat
I live my life waiting
for someone to check my pulse
and confirm that I'm still breathing
I know I'm not.

I live my life waiting
for someone to miss me
when I leave to the pharmaceuticals
I know I'm not
Coming back.

I live my life waiting
whilst sleeping
I count rhythmic heartbeats
off the ceiling
Read the hour by the pulse on my skin
I know I'm not
Coming back
Alive.

I live my life waiting (waiting and waiting)
For someone to give me some sympathy
My chest is a blood spilled symphony
bruising my heart with metal,cutting
my arteries like a wire covered show
the speakers aren't functioning (or so I've heard)
And when I'm awake dreaming
I count sheep in the form of tears
How many tears can I bleed tonight...
I count the hours by the slaughtering of my skin
I know I'm not
Coming back
Alive
But I always do.

I live my life waiting
for a song that hasn't been played,
hope searching,in any kind of way
seeking a vision that doesn't exist,
looking for a solution that's not even there
I never find it.
I live my life waiting
mind sinking in the center of my eyes
all I see is a strained mourning
bitter like the sweetly salted sea
Never could find those little shells with sound
My voicebox shut down
I live my life waiting
but I never learn,so I continue
I know I'm not
Coming back
Alive
I always do
But not today- Although I'm still waiting
for a rhythmic heartbeat.
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[Radical Ed]

"Grammar composed in Life"

Life starts with a capitalized Letter.
Life continues on with little commas,
Marking each event, as it goes along.
Semi colons placed to continue a long event.
Italics, Bold, Underlined words, in Quotations,
Around those that were memorable.
Misspellings happen, mistakes in Life happen.
Numbers show date, time, or a number.
Comma after Comma,
Day One to Today.
Oh count the Commas!
When Life begins, nobody knows when it shall end.
The “fearful” dot. The “fearful” period.
Shall stop the sentence of life.
For now, the commas keep marking,
The Italics, Bold, Underlined words, or Quotations
Mark the Memorable.
And the “period” awaits.

"Shiver"

I am sitting under a roof, but with no walls
I carefully sit in the center, careful not to fall
Cold air, freezing rain, all around me
But no matter how cold I feel, I can’t forget…
The loving warmth you are still giving me

I shiver and my teeth chatters..
I kept warm by rubbing my legs faster
The cold took hold of my body
All except for my blood pumping heart

Goosebumps rise and disappear
Thoughts of you coming nearer..
I can’t seem to control my fears..
As my skin grows numb, and the cold reappears

I pull my knees close to my face
Wishing that I had a better day
Thinking of your beautiful face was overwhelming
Blocking you away from my mind,
Was even more heart breaking..

My cheeks grow red and numb from the cold
I start to understand my feelings, as I grow older
I love you..and my love could not be sold
I love you more than anything..as this paper folds..

[angelfeathers]

Goodbye

Nothing said my love
He means goodbye
This pair of eyes
are not going to see you again
Au revoire
my sweet
darling honey,
splintered soul mate,
goodbye

Nothing says my childhood
It's too late
These string of memories
are for a later date
not today
shouldn't remember
past evenings
riding the swings
It's too great of a memory
for me to handle,
goodbye

Nothing says the dawn
Thin orange ray flickers
by electric wires
tree leaves leave me
and leave me so alone
breeze stray,scatter,hits and dies
only I am left,
goodbye

Nothing says the room
dark,musty silence
farewell,fogged and blurry windows
goodbye mist of morning gloom scent
May showers and crying widows
sober from chimeing solutions
mutiny from wailing imagery
filthy songbirds sing on tombstones
their dreams too were swept away,so
goodbye

Nothing says old age
formal apology for not meeting you
goodbye seniority
no chance to plunge in sleep-state
while feeding diseased pigeons
addio pleasant sunshine on wrinkly hands
plotchy arms,shaking lips,and failing heart
I'm too young to live,so
goodbye

Nothing says death
nothing at all
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[Jordamn]

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[angelfeathers]

Very good poem,Atmosphere. :)

Comatose Dream

Butterflies leaving streaks of color
on fields of paper flowers
and oils of paint in blues and grays
stream down the sky and driplings
of pastel tinted lightings through clouds
help the mountains lean closer and clearer,
and somehow the snow is not so cold twirling
through the air and so I join in the twirling,muted laughter when
I'm found on teal waters,sea foam cover the pale sand
and somehow,there are no prints on the earth beneath me.
I see the water forming higher,building on eachother and
falling as if it tried reaching the sun while it coats itself with
fresher layers of yellow mixed in white,then naps under the
covers in dabs of paint as if they were clouds soaked in
water colored cotton of charcoal grays.
And then it rains,but it's all but water. Lightning compressed
to simple droplets and each sting with every hit on my skin
and so I run,but only run towards the direction of the wind
where I can twirl and enjoy the feeling of this dream.
The dome of beauty above me turns into nothing but blue
without the sunset,because the sun knows it's only a star in
the night and so it rests there,storing strings of vibrance
under the rocks.
Then I lay there and let my eyes follow the path where
playful stars chase each other,where the moon is sleeping
behind a distant eclipse and all there's left of is me,
and somehow I'm not afraid of fireflies glowing a few feet
from me or how I'm paralyzed by the chillness that's not
there and the sheet of breathlessness washes over
me suddently,drowning me as if it were a sea of foam,
and somehow my surroundings collapse between my eyes
and crush my mind,I'm trapped in a world that's washing
farther into the sun and back again in frantic motions,
hysterics sets in like the planets shouldn't and colors
become clear and gone. Sky drips as it all disintegrates,
and I'm somehow under black oiled water.
But I somehow refuse to wake up.
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Best enjoyed if you concentrate on the forming picture in your mind.
I'll add another one since it's short...
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S K Y L I G H T S

make eyes sore
colors seep farther
stars only brighter with the sun
I'd live without air
breathe under the moon
swim in make believe
star fields
I'd love to fly with no wings
sleep on nothing
dream no where
auroras avoid comets
passing by animated planets
inside voids of wondering
nothing's there
only skylights.
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[Jordamn]

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[angelfeathers]

perfectly disordered

She's grumpy when she's hungry
and a ***** when her stomach's empty
but she continues to starve
are you happy,now?

No,so she continues. Misuse of
ipecac,laxatives,medicines,
and outdated food products
she's a knife,a spoon,and a pan
all wrapped up in one.

She naps and dreams sweetly of
sweets,cinnamon rolls,and spaghetti
all of a sudden it becomes a nightmare,
from a stick to a round table,
panic sets neatly like kitchen-ware

Wake up,sleeping beauty.
You pull the covers like if it were fat absorbing
"Gotta rid this dream off me"
Look in the mirror,what do you see?
A perfectly flawed,perfectly cold winter princess
But all you see is the flaws hiding behind your ribs

You haven't got rid of your emotions yet.
So you continue to starve.
Are you good enough now?
When are you going to be perfect?
When are you going to feel the sunshine?
Are you happy,yet?

Of course not.
So you continue,
smashing fiber-rich edibles with your hands
as if you were strangling a magnificent flower
clogging the sewers with bits of your emotions
every time you cry after breakfast,lunch,and dinner

I see you cold in your bruised skin
and emptiness on your brittle hair,
sadness in your emaciated abdomen
it's hurting in your chest, from
the failure in your sunken eyes.
Are you happy?

Never. So you continue.
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[Hero of courage]

Angel of the past:

I know this angel with tender eyes,
A smile with the power to heal,
A heart that past would steal,
The sorrowful angel that never cries…

Someone please mend her bleeding heart,
If anyone deserves to smile it’s an angel,
I will forever protect this treasured jewel,
Just help me care for this little sweetheart.

Feathered wings yearning for freedom,
This angel has yet to learn to fly,
One day I wish to show her the sky,
But past weights on her, so burdensome.

She walks this path that to forever led,
Where darkness seems to lurk behind,
Afraid to look back at what she could find,
All she could think of was to move ahead.

Someone please mend her bleeding heart,
If anyone deserves to smile it’s an angel,
I will forever protect this treasured jewel,
Just help me care for this little sweetheart.

Whenever we speak of events that are foregone,
I feel the weight of held back tears on my heart,
Let me help you in making a brand new start,
One needs not destroy the past for it is gone.…

Quietly, another angel vigilantly watches over you,
Guardian angel of present, he wants you to know,
How much the one you are now makes such a glow,
Whatever happened, he appreciates who you turned into.

Someone please mend her bleeding heart,
If anyone deserves to smile it’s an angel,
I will forever protect this treasured jewel,
Just help me care for this little sweetheart.

I promise to show you the sky,
Even if I have to carry you there,
You will not live as a solitaire,
Your guardian angel is nearby.
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"Taiyz: What the heck! You posted something! That's CRAZY. Downright INSANE, even."

[Jordamn]

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[angelfeathers]

Questionable

From 1 to 30
I feel like a 6
in the negative 100th's

Cherry bomb bubble gum
and lollipops of flavored poison
eats my insides,feeding the pain-
killers killing everything but the pain
pop pills from 1 to 30
50,100,115
milligrams of 4,168.

You wouldn't understand any other way.
They say how pretty you look when you're censoring life,
as complete as a string from a hanging mirror.
This is not how teenage angst 's supposed to be,
muffled laughter to cover up turmoiled terror.
You don't understand,this isn't how it's supposed to feel
No one gets it,That's all,That's it,so damn this.

Unnoticeable grin to distract eyes from tremblings on skin,
asked to know my secret for
leaving my head up high,straight
with barren eyes.
asked to know my secret for
smiling so pretty,oh you'll never know
I only convey joy when I'm in danger.
When in despair,when frightened,
when reality pops,scatters,devours my mind amplified,I'm left
with no safe place to be in.

Daydreams of isolated forests and abandoned castles,
deserted islands,wherever world detached from cautious
regrets and unfaithful wonderings of what if's,I'm left
with no place to be safe.
Oh,what good work I am doing
building my innards into scrap heaps
Oh,how fine I seem to be doing
frozen blood cells interrupting my breathing
Oh,how strong my will seems to be
If only you knew my use for it is to sweep
my crumbling self under the rug

From 1 to 1000
I hold my breath and conceal my chromatic everything.
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[angelfeathers]

Mala gradecida
If you look at the ceiling
in a 45 degree angle,you can
feel the stitches springing off your chest
Que sera no es
no sé,no sé
If you look at your mirror
lying in a blink of an eye,
you can hear light screeches
tearing you to pieces
muñeca imperfecta
how broken you are
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[angelfeathers]

5 minute poem just for the heck of it.


Porcelain wedding bells and ceramic doll houses
for your little girl,
Harmony,I'd hold you,my
precious gift from holiest of holy places
inside my sleep of lace and seam
wrinkle lines trickle in rivulets
I die and grow to be the rotting magnolia
on your window sill.
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