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xAquafiredragon00x
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 Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 8:33 pm Post subject: Poetry Topic |
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Hey, i kinda got this idea for the "Is there anyone that you like" topic, so anyway, if you made a poem you like people to hear, post them here
"There once was a man from Hong Kong
Who always played Donkey kong
When he thought it was lame
He bought a new game
And now he's addicted to pong!"
yeah, i'm not that good, but i just made it up in like....3-5 min
Anyway, who's up
Edit: yep, that's a limerick, i like limericks, they're soo funny
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Peatrical Systems
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 8:42 pm Post subject: Re: Poetry Topic |
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| xAquafiredragon00x wrote: | Hey, i kinda got this idea for the "Is there anyone that you like" topic, so anyway, if you made a poem you like people to hear, post them here
"There once was a man from Hong Kong
Who always played Donkey kong
When he thought it was lame
He bought a new game
And now he's addicted to pong!"
yeah, i'm not that good, but i just made it up in like....3-5 min
Anyway, who's up |
I am not much of a poet my self, but I have written a few essays that some times have a poetic sence.
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Mirage
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 9:47 pm Post subject: |
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ooo i like this! hehe this is one that i wrote some time ago. haha.
I Miss You
I couldnt believe
that you were gone
for so long.
Days, Months, Years
They all came to pass
with everyday I wither away
trying to find the piece of my heart
that was torn.
When will you return to save me
from this Hell?
I miss you...
Isnt that enough?
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xAquafiredragon00x
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 9:53 pm Post subject: |
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eh... i'm looking for this poetry book i made within the last year (school assignment) i actually wrote something that sounded nice, but i can't find it... i think i threw it out.......
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Tanooki
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 9:53 pm Post subject: |
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| I'm a poet but I don't remember what any of my poetry is lol. |
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Ryke
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 9:55 pm Post subject: |
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| Mirage wrote: | ooo i like this! hehe this is one that i wrote some time ago. haha.
I Miss You
I couldnt believe
that you were gone
for so long.
Days, Months, Years
They all came to pass
with everyday I wither away
trying to find the piece of my heart
that was torn.
When will you return to save me
from this Hell?
I miss you...
Isnt that enough? |
real good, reminds me of that one Avril Lavigne song (except that song was for her dead grandfather, from what the lyrics book says. and it's hand written okay, so it was hand written once, then photocopied several million times, so what])
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Mirage
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 9:59 pm Post subject: |
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hm.. i feel like writing again! hehe. anyway here it goes!
Heaven
I look all over
Searching for my heaven.
Where will I find my salvation?
I will find it in you.
You are my heaven
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another one. hehe
I Love You
It has been years
Since I felt someone near me.
Someone looking at me,
talking to me with such sweet words.
I thank you for all the love you gave to me
I thank you will my love.
I love you....
Please love me back...
these two are the best but hey,im in the mood. haha. i will show some of my older stuff later. those are a little better. ^^
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xAquafiredragon00x
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:02 pm Post subject: |
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| Mirage wrote: | hm.. i feel like writing again! hehe. anyway here it goes!
Heaven
I look all over
Searching for my heaven.
Where will I find my salvation?
I will find it in you.
You are my heaven
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another one. hehe
I Love You
It has been years
Since I felt someone near me.
Someone looking at me,
talking to me with such sweet words.
I thank you for all the love you gave to me
I thank you will my love.
I love you....
Please love me back...
these two are the best but hey,im in the mood. haha. i will show some of my older stuff later. those are a little better. ^^ |
looks like we have a poet on the block!
as for those, it was really nice, the heaven one was kinda cute, maybe i should use that line to pick up girls  not that i have the guts to
I'm still loking for my poems, people, if i can't find them, then i'll just have to make up some more
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oblique
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:04 pm Post subject: |
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I've written poems, mostly during class time  , but they're kind of too personal to post...
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Tanooki
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:05 pm Post subject: |
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| Yay! Go Mirage the Poet! If I had my old poems I would put em on here, I have like 200 I wrote ^^; |
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Tanooki
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:06 pm Post subject: |
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| Mine are also pretty too personal... |
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Mirage
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:12 pm Post subject: |
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if its personal, no need to post it. if you think that it would be too deep. personal stuff is good. cause you know for sure that that poem is gonna be really good cause it expresses your true feelings. you know? anyway, found one of my other poems. haha. sorry if too many poems are bugging. haha
Faith
To live alone
To strive without help
To have faith
That one day
someone will save me
and take me to the heavens
Just got to have faith...
Faith in you and me...
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Betaku
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:15 pm Post subject: |
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*Mirage earns the title "Master Poet"* Hehe...your poems are all so good Mirage. I have absolutely no literature skills in me unless I am bored. It may sound wierd...but...yeah....I will post my poem I made awhile ago when I get back home...and when I get my computer back as well. hehe
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Tanooki
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:17 pm Post subject: |
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| Mirage wrote: | if its personal, no need to post it. if you think that it would be too deep. personal stuff is good. cause you know for sure that that poem is gonna be really good cause it expresses your true feelings. you know? anyway, found one of my other poems. haha. sorry if too many poems are bugging. haha
Faith
To live alone
To strive without help
To have faith
That one day
someone will save me
and take me to the heavens
Just got to have faith...
Faith in you and me... |
I'm not really too scared to express my feelings. All of my poems are really deep and emotional but I'll try to post them anyway ^^ |
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Ryke
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| Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:41 pm Post subject: |
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| Mirage wrote: | if its personal, no need to post it. if you think that it would be too deep. personal stuff is good. cause you know for sure that that poem is gonna be really good cause it expresses your true feelings. you know? anyway, found one of my other poems. haha. sorry if too many poems are bugging. haha
Faith
To live alone
To strive without help
To have faith
That one day
someone will save me
and take me to the heavens
Just got to have faith...
Faith in you and me... |
Bugging!? they all rock! I could be more poetic, but I write stories, not poems 
hey! I should make a short stories topic!
and a possible "Non-ToS Fanfics" containing links to people's fanfics!
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